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street of bad love
they call her Blyss.
she made her fortune on Hester St., in the clubs & cafés that run up &
down that nefarious boulevard. she flashes her Rita Hayworth smile at a
man; the sparkle in her gypsy eyes nets him, quick & deadly, in the steel
ribbons of her seduction. you are right away shelling out for champagne &
caviar, diamonds & pearls. hell, lease her a summer house in Tuscany,
why not.
after a single night with her, you imagine the most beautiful way to expire
would be to die in her bed, covered in the scarlet bouquet of her kisses.
her naked body is at once too glorious & too sinful to reveal; before the
scene erodes to pornography, the camera pans outside the window, to a
peerless moon.
you ravage her in your dirty fantasies, & even worse, you write poems about
her. but one man is never enough for her, she’s the poster girl for polygamy.
she collects men like links in a chain. when you realize you’re only a trinket
on her cheap bracelet, you cry. you cry like a thing that is no longer a man;
you need to lose yourself.
there’s nowhere to run, but you run anyway, speeding down a killer highway
in your ragtop death machine, no headlights, no brakes. if your lucky, a
brick wall will jump out of the black velvet night & smash you into oblivion.
for the first time in your miserable life, you know beyond reckoning
that there is a God: only a force of such incomprehensible nature
could create a woman like her…
she makes love like a shotgun
with both barrels
(Art by Nico)
Published 3rd Apr 2015
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Anonymous
3rd Apr 2015 11:16pm
yup, yup and yup.
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4th Apr 2015 1:24am
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4th Apr 2015 1:42am
after a single night with her, you imagine the most beautiful way to expire
would be to die in her bed, covered in the scarlet bouquet of her kisses.
her naked body is at once too glorious & too sinful to reveal; before the
scene erodes to pornography, the camera pans outside the window, to a
peerless moon.
Absolutely breathtaking beautiful !
U broke me Johnny Rotten you broke me is what you did!!!
Loves you ...................
Jackie xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
would be to die in her bed, covered in the scarlet bouquet of her kisses.
her naked body is at once too glorious & too sinful to reveal; before the
scene erodes to pornography, the camera pans outside the window, to a
peerless moon.
Absolutely breathtaking beautiful !
U broke me Johnny Rotten you broke me is what you did!!!
Loves you ...................
Jackie xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
4th Apr 2015 2:03am
"there’s nowhere to run, but you run anyway, speeding down a killer highway
in your ragtop death machine, no headlights, no brakes. if your lucky, a
brick wall will jump out of the black velvet night & smash you into oblivion.
for the first time in your miserable life, you know beyond reckoning
that there is a God: only a force of such incomprehensible nature
could create a woman like her…
she makes love like a shotgun
with both barrels "
Perfect way to end the poem!
Men need to find women like this, and stay away from them as well!
in your ragtop death machine, no headlights, no brakes. if your lucky, a
brick wall will jump out of the black velvet night & smash you into oblivion.
for the first time in your miserable life, you know beyond reckoning
that there is a God: only a force of such incomprehensible nature
could create a woman like her…
she makes love like a shotgun
with both barrels "
Perfect way to end the poem!
Men need to find women like this, and stay away from them as well!
4th Apr 2015 2:06am
"The camera pans outside the window" and tracks a film noir babe down Scarlet Street. Kind of makes life sweet.
4th Apr 2015 2:21am
Anonymous
4th Apr 2015 3:15am
feddeler, i can't even with this one. she sounds like a hell of a woman. i'd like to know her.
4th Apr 2015 3:46am
Every man's fantasy, every woman's idol.
To invoke such a passion is dream making.
Love this write.
To invoke such a passion is dream making.
Love this write.
4th Apr 2015 4:49am
Anonymous
4th Apr 2015 6:34am
This is why, the girl next door will never ever have a chance lol
Fantastic story John, she's deadly, dangerous and utterly delicious.
Fantastic story John, she's deadly, dangerous and utterly delicious.
4th Apr 2015 7:39pm
taken in, forced yo keep reading until the end - making this tale perfect - a story with passion and a warning - all good
:-)
:-)
4th Apr 2015 10:19pm
she makes love like a shot gun
Both barrels
The end sealed it so sweetly
I enjoyed it much
Both barrels
The end sealed it so sweetly
I enjoyed it much
5th Apr 2015 1:32pm
she makes love like a shotgun
with both barrels
... gods i love those lines. brilliant as always Mister Feddeler
with both barrels
... gods i love those lines. brilliant as always Mister Feddeler
5th Apr 2015 8:57pm
6th Apr 2015 00:00am
6th Apr 2015 8:36pm
a fabulous poem filled with lines that punch there point home …
another remarkable ink JohnFeddeler … so well executed … YES !!
another remarkable ink JohnFeddeler … so well executed … YES !!
9th Apr 2015 5:13am
Gripping, I love it! It sounds like the first page of a crime thriller set in Chicago or Detroit or one of those places... It's 9.05pm in a basement flat somewhere, nowhere you'd ever want to go. A gritty cop returns home to a malodorous Siamese with a superiority complex and complete mastery in the Zen art of crapping with his arse outside the box. As the Cop tries to recall where he left the sponge and bucket, the cat docks his feet in the four corners of the sand. Runs his dastardly plan through his mind again. Waits for the inevitable thud of stool on carpet.
Half a mile away in a Penthouse flat, Blyss kicks off her Louboutins and prepares to take her last shower. But first, she'd better answer that phone.
Half a mile away in a Penthouse flat, Blyss kicks off her Louboutins and prepares to take her last shower. But first, she'd better answer that phone.
10th Apr 2015 1:42pm
"after a single night with her, you imagine the most beautiful way to expire
would be to die in her bed, covered in the scarlet bouquet of her kisses."
just love that line...does anyone long like this anymore? The silvery night of heartache just seems like a fairytale. been missing your lines. kisses to you, Poet.
would be to die in her bed, covered in the scarlet bouquet of her kisses."
just love that line...does anyone long like this anymore? The silvery night of heartache just seems like a fairytale. been missing your lines. kisses to you, Poet.
