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Ply
Firm hands
Encase hips
Traverse soft thighs
Gently parted
Fingers and thumbs
Seek slick hunger
Solicit sighs
Manipulate pleasure
Perfect pressure
Persistent friction
Writhing crescendo
Your delicious release
Encase hips
Traverse soft thighs
Gently parted
Fingers and thumbs
Seek slick hunger
Solicit sighs
Manipulate pleasure
Perfect pressure
Persistent friction
Writhing crescendo
Your delicious release
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Re: Ply
Sexy, sensual write. 3 wee stanzas have me fully satisfied. The sight and feel of a man's hands working is truly erotic.
Great piece. LIKE.
Great piece. LIKE.
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re: Re: Ply
2nd Apr 2015 4:55am
That telling clench, is well worth the acid burn of muscle fatigue.
Thanks Looloo, happy to satisfy ;)
Thanks Looloo, happy to satisfy ;)
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Anonymous
2nd Apr 2015 00:18am
Well if this doesn't get her going I don't know what will! Well done, mister 76. Very well done!
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2nd Apr 2015 5:27am
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5th Apr 2015 1:48am
Re: Ply
2nd Apr 2015 4:13pm
I was initially mad when I read this, because I was in the middle of a poem about the same exact thing and you captured it so well and concisely. haha But I have had time to calm down (I wasn't THAT mad) and comment. This is really well written, Frank. Great job.
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re: Re: Ply
5th Apr 2015 1:50am
Sorry to beat you to the punch there Sammy, interesting that both of us were in the same head (hand?) space at the same time.
Did you end up writing your poem? I would be discouraged by my 'posting first' I would be keen to see what your mind and word play do with the same topic.
Did you end up writing your poem? I would be discouraged by my 'posting first' I would be keen to see what your mind and word play do with the same topic.
Re: Ply
2nd Apr 2015 4:53pm
Frank, your technique is above reproach. I'm sure you get some major results from the women in your life. Very instructive work!
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re: Re: Ply
5th Apr 2015 1:52am
The real trick is getting close enough (past defenses? Earned trust?) to perform tricks involving sleight of hand in the first place my friend! ;)
Re: Ply
3rd Apr 2015 4:38pm
Yes i quite agree with crow, your poetry is always spot on!!!
Enjoyed this as i enjoy everything i read of yours Frank :)
Always
Zazzles
Enjoyed this as i enjoy everything i read of yours Frank :)
Always
Zazzles
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re: Re: Ply
8th Apr 2015 10:43pm
Thanks Zazzles - business has been winning over pleasure lately so I haevnt' had as much time for the site as I would like.
I very much appreciate you stopping by for a read!
Cheers Zazzles.
I very much appreciate you stopping by for a read!
Cheers Zazzles.