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nothing
You broke me down
Stomped on my dreams
Ripped life from my hands
Did it make you feel like more of a man
We all know you have to over compensate
Not saying for what
No need for a magnum on your dates
Emotionless
As I cried
Wept for a life
Nothing on your face
Take the lingerie in your fingers
As you plow into my vaginal walls
One thrust two
Almost through
Face the wall
No longer could I cry
Tears didnt fall
I lie there
Emotionless
Nothing on my face
Stomped on my dreams
Ripped life from my hands
Did it make you feel like more of a man
We all know you have to over compensate
Not saying for what
No need for a magnum on your dates
Emotionless
As I cried
Wept for a life
Nothing on your face
Take the lingerie in your fingers
As you plow into my vaginal walls
One thrust two
Almost through
Face the wall
No longer could I cry
Tears didnt fall
I lie there
Emotionless
Nothing on my face
Published 1st Apr 2015
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1st Apr 2015 6:57am
1st Apr 2015 10:13am
1st Apr 2015 11:19am
Deep. Real visual with the vaginal verse. I also like the repetition of "nothing on my face". I like the reality of how this "man" broke you down, but you are expressin' yo pain in poetry which is dope! Keep it up and the imagery!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...jea..
1st Apr 2015 10:43pm
2nd Apr 2015 3:39am
2nd Apr 2015 5:40pm
This reminds me of one I wrote a long time ago. I love the depth of emotion, you really nailed the feelings home...making the reader feel what you feel. Well done.
