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love bites
Your hurt
your tears
my fault
my fears
you gave your all
I let you fall
I fell for you
not available to do
loving you is easy
losing you is hard
when I have given
you my whole heart
ILUMB!
your tears
my fault
my fears
you gave your all
I let you fall
I fell for you
not available to do
loving you is easy
losing you is hard
when I have given
you my whole heart
ILUMB!
Published 30th Mar 2015
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16th Apr 2015 5:01am
"love bites" often true, Natalie.
Nothing controls us like it does.
Nor is there a substitute.
Love bites and leaves its mark.
Whether the mark be painful or pleasant depends upon our choice. Love is whatever we choose to make it.
Thought provoking realism in this piece.
XO
C.
Nothing controls us like it does.
Nor is there a substitute.
Love bites and leaves its mark.
Whether the mark be painful or pleasant depends upon our choice. Love is whatever we choose to make it.
Thought provoking realism in this piece.
XO
C.
16th Apr 2015 2:35pm
Thanks for the insight Chad. You are absolutely right.
Even love that is short lived is a beautiful thing. It is a time in one's life that another brought them happiness and while it may hurt when it's gone, you have to find peace knowing you were loved. Maybe a better time or place would better suit that love. I am a born romantic and believe in fate, love at first site and happily ever after. If you don't believe in those things then you aren't really allowing yourself to be truly loved. (My opinion anyway!).
Thanks for reading and the comment. As always!
XO
Natalie
Even love that is short lived is a beautiful thing. It is a time in one's life that another brought them happiness and while it may hurt when it's gone, you have to find peace knowing you were loved. Maybe a better time or place would better suit that love. I am a born romantic and believe in fate, love at first site and happily ever after. If you don't believe in those things then you aren't really allowing yourself to be truly loved. (My opinion anyway!).
Thanks for reading and the comment. As always!
XO
Natalie
20th Apr 2015 3:48am
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