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Déjà-voo
It seems I heard it long ago,
I look back to the moon,
it passes
in light of the movement,
I was suspicious,
It headed off in some easterly direction.
I look back to the moon,
it passes
in light of the movement,
I was suspicious,
It headed off in some easterly direction.
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Re: Déjà-voo
26th Mar 2015 2:40am
That half-remembered scuttle up your spine. It's an intriguing little story with sparse description. Frankly, I enjoy these scenarios. When you begin to enjoy them, they become harder to find. You become a curious skeptic. Then you become that suspicious thing in the dark. Head east. Good stuff!
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re: Re: Déjà-voo
26th Mar 2015 10:17pm
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26th Mar 2015 9:50am
Re: Déjà-voo
26th Mar 2015 11:50am
Digi-voo......
where
have we
mighta
once
been
? may be even twice
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26th Mar 2015 10:21pm
Re: Déjà-voo
26th Mar 2015 11:56pm
what mystic tune rides the moon to the eastern horizon... your poem is enchanted...
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26th Mar 2015 11:58pm