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The Man I Want
He walks up behind me
And wraps his
Arms around my waist.
I want
Him to tangle his legs with mine
Before the burgeoning shadows of night
Creep into the room
And sleep finds its mark.
I want
The tender kisses as well
As the passionate deep.
I want
A man who is inspired by intellect
Who can find truths and mistakes
Brilliantly polished by the strokes of a painters brush.
I want
Him to sometimes reach under the table
Part my legs and with
Smooth sophistication
Fondle and caress me to oblivion
While dinner cools on a porcelain plate.
I want
To be on all fours
So that he can firmly hold my hips
And push hard into my scented cunt
Pulling my hair,
For better leverage.
I want him to possess the strength
To navigate the labyrinth,
Into the solemn dark
Of my heart.
And wraps his
Arms around my waist.
I want
Him to tangle his legs with mine
Before the burgeoning shadows of night
Creep into the room
And sleep finds its mark.
I want
The tender kisses as well
As the passionate deep.
I want
A man who is inspired by intellect
Who can find truths and mistakes
Brilliantly polished by the strokes of a painters brush.
I want
Him to sometimes reach under the table
Part my legs and with
Smooth sophistication
Fondle and caress me to oblivion
While dinner cools on a porcelain plate.
I want
To be on all fours
So that he can firmly hold my hips
And push hard into my scented cunt
Pulling my hair,
For better leverage.
I want him to possess the strength
To navigate the labyrinth,
Into the solemn dark
Of my heart.
Published 25th Mar 2015
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25th Mar 2015 4:56pm
26th Mar 2015 00:41am
25th Mar 2015 5:16pm
"I'm right here, damn it! Geez, are you going to come and pick me up or not?"
That's some sexy scribbling kid!
That's some sexy scribbling kid!
26th Mar 2015 00:42am
This is wonderful work, Virginia. You structure this really well with the "I wants" acting as a type of punctuation, the taking of a breath between qualities. First there's the physical want, being embraced from behind. Then it's emotional, finding an alliance against the encroaching shadows of apparent fear. Then the want turns to sensitivity as well as passion, represented in a kiss. Then it's intellect, which I'm sure he'd find with you. Then it's sexual. First with elegance, the exploring fingers beneath the table. Then getting into the animalistic and carnal, on all fours. And finally a transcendent mystery, the labyrinth and solemn darkness of your heart. This is clearly a lot to explore but you do so with economy and precision. Your desires seem more than reasonable to me.
26th Mar 2015 00:42am
25th Mar 2015 7:59pm
These are deep and pure desires. You want a man who will fulfill you. This is very reasonable, and the flow is very natural. A strong write of longing. Stunning.
26th Mar 2015 00:43am
Anonymous
25th Mar 2015 8:18pm
One Petal at a time will find your way to the heart of a rose.
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25th Mar 2015 8:25pm
26th Mar 2015 00:44am
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26th Mar 2015 00:44am
25th Mar 2015 10:16pm
beautiful poetry, sensual, elegant. you have a fine sense of sophisticated erotica.
words that would set any man on fire...
words that would set any man on fire...
26th Mar 2015 00:40am
excellent work as always - I particularly like the use of two word lines - 'I want' gives passion to the desire - I would have been tempted with 'I want' as a last line :-)
26th Mar 2015 5:57am
You too are quite clever. I really enjoyed this one. It's sensual but not overly dirty, giving it style rather than shock factor. I feel like I can hear the passionate breaths as I read it, which I think is pretty cool. Also, I would go so far as to call it romantic rather than erotic. You found the perfect balance with this one. Nice write!
26th Mar 2015 2:57pm
You spout the sentiments of my heart Ms. Petal.
It is a call to all. LOVE.
It is a call to all. LOVE.
27th Mar 2015 9:52am
This is a message for all men, just because you fuck well don't mean women would fall on their knees and beg for cock. women look for much more than a fuck machine. Love must count for something.
26th Apr 2015 11:56pm
Just did a re-read. This is such a raw, sensual and passionate poem. You are seriously talented Virginia.
21st May 2015 7:58pm
So well done!
At the end, the labyrinth of your heart --I think, maybe it is your souls twisting and turning we read about here.
Jay
At the end, the labyrinth of your heart --I think, maybe it is your souls twisting and turning we read about here.
Jay
