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Looking in the mirror
I look in the mirror,
All I can say is,
"What the fuck,"
I study my face,
The face covering the sorrow,
The sorrow with tears of blood running down my face,
"Why am I here,"
All I can think is what my purpose is,
I look into my blue eyes,
Thinking of the endless waters,
I look at myself only thinking,
Thinking where did I go wrong,
I study the posture and the figure,
"How come I have near to no friends,"
I keep looking in the mirror,
Ready to fade into the darkness
All I can say is,
"What the fuck,"
I study my face,
The face covering the sorrow,
The sorrow with tears of blood running down my face,
"Why am I here,"
All I can think is what my purpose is,
I look into my blue eyes,
Thinking of the endless waters,
I look at myself only thinking,
Thinking where did I go wrong,
I study the posture and the figure,
"How come I have near to no friends,"
I keep looking in the mirror,
Ready to fade into the darkness
Published 15th May 2011
| Edited 17th May 2011
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15th May 2011 4:51am
This is a nice poem, might I suggest taking out none in line14 and replacing it with no. I think that would help it flow better, but its your choice.
17th May 2011 2:17am
