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Spring
Spring is the season of a girl on her period.
She is so bipolar.
When in heat we all suffer with hot weather,
But when she is grumpy and mad the winds are way out of control.
When she is blue we are getting soaked in her tears,
But when she is in the best mood ever, we are at the park having a great BBQ.
She is so bipolar.
When in heat we all suffer with hot weather,
But when she is grumpy and mad the winds are way out of control.
When she is blue we are getting soaked in her tears,
But when she is in the best mood ever, we are at the park having a great BBQ.
Published 13th Mar 2015
| Edited 26th Feb 2016
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Anonymous
13th Mar 2015 7:45pm
Great write, Mocosa.. really beautifully written.. great ink..
Dave
Dave
13th Mar 2015 10:53pm
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14th Mar 2015 1:13pm
This is such a great comparison. I am bipolar so I totally got it. The only critique I would offer is change the word 'have' to 'having' to make the flow better. Otherwise a lovely piece of work.
14th Mar 2015 7:09pm
Thank you :) Im glad you enjoyed! I just caught that mistake thanks for pointing it out :)
18th Mar 2015 3:12pm
I'm also bipolar, and try to stay off the swings. Sometimes having a decent barbecue is enough.
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