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Little Creatures
Little creatures in the deep.
Little creatures eat your feet.
Little creatures inside your skin.
Little creatures eat and grin.
Little creatures eat and crawl up your body.
Little Creatures eat till there balky.
Little creatures never full.
Little creatures mean and cruel.
Little creatures eat you to dust.
Little creatures leave bones like bread crust.
Little creatures eat your feet.
Little creatures inside your skin.
Little creatures eat and grin.
Little creatures eat and crawl up your body.
Little Creatures eat till there balky.
Little creatures never full.
Little creatures mean and cruel.
Little creatures eat you to dust.
Little creatures leave bones like bread crust.
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Re: Little Creatures
10th Mar 2015 8:21am
Ohh u know that feeling when u loose a spider in ur home - the itchy feeling - well I have it after reading this :D
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10th Mar 2015 10:55am
Yeah that's what I was thinking! I wrote this poem after I saw on Facebook a picture of a man's foot being eaten alive by parasites, it was sooooooooo disturbing. There were hundreds of holes in his foot!!! I thought if that happened to me I would chop my foot off in a heartbeat!
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10th Mar 2015 4:56pm
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Re: Little Creatures
10th Mar 2015 3:36pm
I take it these aren't hamsters. I suffer from ratphobia myself. I see one and I take off like a Crow!
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10th Mar 2015 5:31pm
Hahahahaha yeah these aren't hamsters, the best way I can describe them are termites that eat skin instead of wood!!
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Anonymous
10th Mar 2015 7:44pm
Nice write, Poison.. well done..
Dave
Dave
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10th Mar 2015 7:58pm
Re: Little Creatures
11th Mar 2015 2:18am
Can't stand that feeling, I get it when I see maggots eating road kill...
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11th Mar 2015 7:50pm
Hahahahahaha I think maggots eating roadkill is kind of cool looking (sorry)! But yeah I hate other bugs that bite and eat flesh.
Re: Little Creatures
13th Mar 2015 4:06pm
Real or imagined creatures they do give the skin and mind creepy crawlies, nice work.
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13th Mar 2015 5:30pm
Re: Little Creatures
13th Mar 2015 11:26pm
love this poem but strangely it has made me feel really itchy all of a sudden :P
Nice work :-)
Nice work :-)
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14th Mar 2015 1:24am
Re: Little Creatures
14th Mar 2015 6:28am
This is quiet a piece.... I'd love me some little creatures indeed!!!!
Darker.
Darker.
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14th Mar 2015 8:53pm
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