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Only emptiness remains
My head is spinning.
Loneliness is winning.
Weak, can't fight.
Ends in sight.
Only emptiness remains.
My mind's insane.
Twisting thoughts inside.
My soul cries.
My hearts bleeding.
Death now leading.
Not very long.
My spirits gone.
Soul finally released.
My breathing ceased.
Loneliness is winning.
Weak, can't fight.
Ends in sight.
Only emptiness remains.
My mind's insane.
Twisting thoughts inside.
My soul cries.
My hearts bleeding.
Death now leading.
Not very long.
My spirits gone.
Soul finally released.
My breathing ceased.
Published 27th Feb 2015
| Edited 23rd Dec 2023
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25th Sep 2015 7:43am
I Like How you narrated this, step by step through the process and final conclusion...Very well done friend... How are things: wolf
27th Sep 2015 4:30am
Thanks glad u like it. My mind isn't what it used to be. Was found unresponsive last April. Their not sure how long o wasn't breathing. So have lil trouble with words. I get very upset that I can't write like before but it's getting better. Thanks
