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Hot, Sweaty Night
It’s just that image…..
Of you bare chested
Broad shouldered
Understated tattoos
Your muscular girth
Hidden beneath
The secretive volumes
Of distressed jeans…
Waking me out of a light slumber
To lie down next to me…
It’s that image
That I can’t quite
Get out of my head.
Of you bare chested
Broad shouldered
Understated tattoos
Your muscular girth
Hidden beneath
The secretive volumes
Of distressed jeans…
Waking me out of a light slumber
To lie down next to me…
It’s that image
That I can’t quite
Get out of my head.
Published 20th Feb 2015
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20th Feb 2015 4:58pm
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20th Feb 2015 5:17pm
20th Feb 2015 5:11pm
I can't help but wonder if this image of your apparently ideal man is based in reality. Is it a composite of attributes composing the man of your dreams? I've got my own hot and sweaty nights. I won't go into my own idea of female perfection here. Another time. Until then, I enjoyed this. Always interesting to see what goes on in that head of yours, Virginia.
20th Feb 2015 5:20pm
Anonymous
20th Feb 2015 5:17pm
Pretty sure I wouldn't be able to get it out of my head either.
20th Feb 2015 5:20pm
Yes, it's fairly difficult. But I do admit I am not trying that hard....
20th Feb 2015 5:59pm
I just went looked in the mirror. Greying hair, beady eyes, two day stubble, sagging muscles, front tooth missing and jeans that keep falling off. Sigh!
