Burning

Mmmmmmm.....very nice.  Bliss spoken in but a few simple, well placed words.  I like this.....

thank you Mahogany :)
its all about the placement

Short and sweet, with a nice sensuous tone!
Like! Cheers! Scot.

thankyou Scot
its is that
nice and sensual

Kind of reminds me of the Doors.  "Come on baby light my fire."  But you've got your own voice, which is brilliant.  Inflammatory, in fact.

Inflammable material playing in my head Mr Crow xD

It sure sets the imagination on fire. you have said it short and sweet but what you say wants me to take it to its natural conclusion. That is the impact of the poem.Loved it!

Thank you Mmsiraj

Rose,

Wow! You've got me contemplating the night to day explosion of light from that lit fuse! Great erotic visual.

tornado

Yes stand back Mr T
And watch the display

Light and back away  hehe

Love each line :-)

Hot stuff you got here ;-)

It's flammable material  hehe

A raging fire burns in the depths... and you captured that succinctly.

Lovely !

Aww thankyou starzzz