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Sideshow
She offers her sly performance art
And, hey, she's fairly adequate
Dancing and advancing with precision
Promising "the finest in family entertainment"
The tent lights dimming on the patsies
They only think they know what's going on
That mistress of the dark is "a miracle"
A "cutting edge wonder", in fact
She shimmies closer
Allowing her breasts to sway
Making the rubes change their tune very quickly
Since, somehow, they become aroused
Their state of awe growing
Achieving altitude the closer she approaches
She finally takes this matter well in hand
Offering guidance and momentary joy
That's fading soon as they leave the tent
And her face becomes wreathed in smoke
Whispering "You will never quite shake me.
Down we go."
And, hey, she's fairly adequate
Dancing and advancing with precision
Promising "the finest in family entertainment"
The tent lights dimming on the patsies
They only think they know what's going on
That mistress of the dark is "a miracle"
A "cutting edge wonder", in fact
She shimmies closer
Allowing her breasts to sway
Making the rubes change their tune very quickly
Since, somehow, they become aroused
Their state of awe growing
Achieving altitude the closer she approaches
She finally takes this matter well in hand
Offering guidance and momentary joy
That's fading soon as they leave the tent
And her face becomes wreathed in smoke
Whispering "You will never quite shake me.
Down we go."
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Re: Sideshow
1st Feb 2015 4:29pm
Crowfly...clever, sexy write. You have a unique wit, my friend. I always look forward to your posts
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1st Feb 2015 4:39pm
Thanks, Virginia. This is loosely based on a dream I had last night. I never know what'll pop out of my subconscious.
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1st Feb 2015 4:42pm
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Anonymous
1st Feb 2015 4:49pm
this reminds me of a chapter out of water for elephants.
very good write, good sir. very good!
very good write, good sir. very good!
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1st Feb 2015 4:55pm
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Anonymous
1st Feb 2015 5:03pm
it's a witty love story that takes place in a traveling circus! complete with randy side show acts. very good. very, very good.
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1st Feb 2015 5:33pm
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1st Feb 2015 5:57pm
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2nd Feb 2015 1:55am
it reminds me of a freak show somehow
Like under a bigtop!
Great imagery in this one crow i can see it all down to the clown with a light up nose!
Brava!
Zazzles
Like under a bigtop!
Great imagery in this one crow i can see it all down to the clown with a light up nose!
Brava!
Zazzles
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2nd Feb 2015 4:11am
This is kind of a freak show but everyone is welcome to participate. There's a seductress in "Sideshow"'s center ring, kind of a witch. Something wicked this way comes...
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2nd Feb 2015 7:33am
I adore your dark wit and charm Mr. Seville!!!
I dare gash at all the nummies you have on display***
sorry was going wit it...*Giggles*
Great Stuff Crow
I dare gash at all the nummies you have on display***
sorry was going wit it...*Giggles*
Great Stuff Crow
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2nd Feb 2015 7:35am
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2nd Feb 2015 9:19am
Promising "the finest in family entertainment".
Classic - I can imagine the quirky upturned edges of your mouth as you pencil this line. Bawdy is the word for this piece, a debauch carnivale, a 1900's style circus poster painted in words.
Win!
Classic - I can imagine the quirky upturned edges of your mouth as you pencil this line. Bawdy is the word for this piece, a debauch carnivale, a 1900's style circus poster painted in words.
Win!
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Re: Sideshow
2nd Feb 2015 5:10pm
I was thinking in terms of the Addams Family in one of their kinkier moods. Thanks, Frank.
Re: Sideshow
3rd Feb 2015 1:18am
Interesting imagery evoked here. Given my weird humour...:) its funny too. The scene of swaying breasts hit my mind most:)
She shimmies closer
Allowing her breasts to sway
Love the read Crowfly.
She shimmies closer
Allowing her breasts to sway
Love the read Crowfly.
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3rd Feb 2015 1:30am
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Anonymous
3rd Feb 2015 8:03pm
Crow.....Awesome write always......just luv your work.....enjoyed this sexy piece.....xo :)
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3rd Feb 2015 9:02pm