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Gently Before He Dies
By Enigma Rose (crowfly)
She takes him for a final ride
One last time before he goes
Takes him gently deep inside
The forgiving petals of this Rose
Her flawed hero dies free from fear
And it comes as a release
There's the blood stain of her tear
But with it comes a lasting peace.
She takes him for a final ride
One last time before he goes
Takes him gently deep inside
The forgiving petals of this Rose
Her flawed hero dies free from fear
And it comes as a release
There's the blood stain of her tear
But with it comes a lasting peace.
Published 31st Jan 2015
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31st Jan 2015 5:42pm
Crow an Absolutely perfect sequel, or ending
i really have goosebumps!!
wow WHAT A FUCKING punch to my senses !!!
Zazzles xoxox
i really have goosebumps!!
wow WHAT A FUCKING punch to my senses !!!
Zazzles xoxox
31st Jan 2015 5:48pm
Thanks, Zazzles. There may be further adventures of Enigma Rose. This one's more melancholy than usual.
31st Jan 2015 7:19pm
"The forgiving petals of this Rose","the bloodstain of her tear"
The symbolism is downright palpable in this my friend. A fantastic write.
The symbolism is downright palpable in this my friend. A fantastic write.
31st Jan 2015 7:41pm
Thank you, Sammy. Enigma Rose can be bloodthirsty, but for today she put the blade away.
1st Feb 2015 4:06am
Wow.....this is inspiring......I could wrote off this.....being a flower as I am.....LOL!!! Luv this.....xo :)
Thanks, Flower. You inspire me too, and I'm not planning to die any time soon!
Anonymous
1st Feb 2015 4:32am
and she has a soft side! i do really love this woman. perfect blend of badass and delicate flower.
1st Feb 2015 4:40am
Anonymous
1st Feb 2015 4:55am
a weapon within reach is always a good idea!
