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Murderous love
Don’t mind us we just spilling guts haha! Take their eyes out smile wickedly as you cut the perfect ways. Laugh like a maniac because this is not our love then hang them by the neck and smirk as they gag for air. Their body shakes and there color goes as they chock on their last remaining breath of hope. You lick your lips as the body just hangs there. If this ant love then you don’t wanna be love because I’ll make you regret ever coming to me! No worries we are just spilling are guts. Maybe… hehehehe!
Published 29th Jan 2015
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29th Jan 2015 7:03pm
29th Jan 2015 7:15pm
30th Jan 2015 6:36pm
To be honest its too
Mainstream
Too shallow
too short
You started well but ended very poorly
U ve got a nice story line, but your poetry is just like the skeleton of what you trying to write about.
Mainstream
Too shallow
too short
You started well but ended very poorly
U ve got a nice story line, but your poetry is just like the skeleton of what you trying to write about.
well I'm sorry if didn't like it. I write short poems. It just how I write if you don't like my poems maybe you shouldn't read them. As I said I write short poems not long ass poems that takes you hours to read! Thank You for your comment.
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