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Grace
She has a kind of fragile grace
The way she falls apart
Still puts on that morning face
And stitches up her heart
She goes out to face the day
Puts on her bravest smile
She knows full well she's here to stay
And will live her life with style.
The way she falls apart
Still puts on that morning face
And stitches up her heart
She goes out to face the day
Puts on her bravest smile
She knows full well she's here to stay
And will live her life with style.
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Anonymous
28th Jan 2015 11:20pm
:) love everything about this, crow. everything!
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Anonymous
28th Jan 2015 11:33pm
such a good assessment, crow. why waste words when you've already said everything that needs to be said?
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28th Jan 2015 11:20pm
I love the way this lady holds herself with such strength and style.. great write Sir Crow with love Crim :)
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28th Jan 2015 11:27pm
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28th Jan 2015 11:45pm
I love the title, the theme and all of everything else. Tight little write, Crow.
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28th Jan 2015 11:52pm
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28th Jan 2015 11:51pm
Very nice! Great write Crowfly. It flows and it is full of get up and go encouragement! I love it.
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28th Jan 2015 11:54pm
Thanks, Sammy. I think we could all use some encouragement. I appreciate yours.
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29th Jan 2015 00:35am
wonderful write! crow, the hope, the yearning, the victory all amount to a feel good read!
Cheers! Scot.
Cheers! Scot.
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29th Jan 2015 9:56pm
Thanks, Scot. Put Grace under pressure and she does eventually come out a winner.
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29th Jan 2015 9:58pm
Thanks so much for that sweet praise, Schiitaryn! I always enjoy your work too.
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29th Jan 2015 4:07am
Awww u are too kind, I loved the soft side of the Crow Nicely said, enjoyed I always do...
Zazzles xoxoxox
Zazzles xoxoxox
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29th Jan 2015 9:59pm
Thank you, Zazzles. I'm trying to keep my hard side under control. Not an easy task!
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29th Jan 2015 10:02pm
Ha! I can see how you might get that impression, Loki. But she's just a survivor, very much still alive.
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Anonymous
29th Jan 2015 10:48am
Sir Crow,
A beautiful poem my friend, showing that no matter what breaks us down we can still get back up with style! Love it.
Lady Muse
A beautiful poem my friend, showing that no matter what breaks us down we can still get back up with style! Love it.
Lady Muse
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29th Jan 2015 10:06pm
Lady Muse,
That is the trick. Just keep moving, try to minimize the pain and don't let anyone fuck with you. And carry a Glock, just in case.
Sir Crow
That is the trick. Just keep moving, try to minimize the pain and don't let anyone fuck with you. And carry a Glock, just in case.
Sir Crow
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