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seems like he has you wrapped.

Not that i haven't been there :-/

Great write :-)

Far too many of us have been there and it's a terrible place!!   Thanks...Devil.  

hate this feeling.

good write though. very good!

Yes, I hate it too.  Thank you Minerva.  

So intense, a weak spot that can't be denied no matter what the consequence, I feel u lady

Thank you, Muse!  

a very dangerously seductive write thrilling to read with love Crim :)

It sounds like you deserve better, obviously in fact.  Those icy lips and forked tongue should find another target.  But it's not that simple.  You feel trapped.  You continue to give all, and believe you'll never be free.  At least you acknowledge what sounds like a vicious emotional and erotic circle.  Is that desire so compelling that you can't move on?  That title might mean complete submission.  As long as that's what he's used to, that's what he'll get unless he encounters some resistance, something telling him to change or take a hike.
Is there something so attractive about him that makes you want to stay?  He sounds like kind of a monster.  This is erotic but sad, Virginia.  Fine work.

Love the write.. but hate the situation.. thanks for sharing..


Dave

A terrifying feeling, the love/hate feeling of fight or flight, submit or hit. The siren song of seduction into devastation of chaos resonates deeply, like the voodoo spell. The imagery of the icy lips and forked tongue seem to express how your core self sees this person. Remember to do what you KNOW you want and forget what you FEEL you want in those moments. Like an addict, the power to overcome lies in logic and truth, but are too often overwhelmed by cravings and desires. Sometimes logic is more important than emotion, even in the arena of such things as love. All the best to you and all my love, Virginia. This is well written, you capture all of this very poignantly. Be strong and good luck.

its a shit position to be in. being a door mat is never going to have a happy ending :-(

fantastically expressive Ink :-)

A terrible situation to be in, been there. I feel this immensely, you've captured that emotional state so well. I wish this on no one and it always makes my heart sad to see others going through it.

You can be free if you choose to be. It starts with realizing  that you deserve better and that you have the strength to do what's best for you. Getting out is completely worth it in every single way, you'll feel amazing afterwards, it's one of the best highs ever. I wish you luck and hope that you get to experience it. :)

well expressed. love & hate really are inseparable twins...

Been there a time or two myself and its so hard to break free. You are right, one kiss and you are back where you started, trapped. Good poem.