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An Analysis of an Embrace
When does a hug turn into an embrace?
As we stood there by your doorstep,
the way our bodies held each other;
so naturally, so completely,
I felt one with you, as warmth filled my mind,
peace and calmness filling the gaps in between
where our clothes made unnecessary spaces
that no longer seem to exist.
You feel closer every time we touch.
As we stood there by your doorstep,
the way our bodies held each other;
so naturally, so completely,
I felt one with you, as warmth filled my mind,
peace and calmness filling the gaps in between
where our clothes made unnecessary spaces
that no longer seem to exist.
You feel closer every time we touch.
Published 20th Jan 2015
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20th Jan 2015 9:21pm
Beautiful analysis..I love "where our clothes made unnecessary spaces. Nice work, Sammy.
20th Jan 2015 10:03pm
haha Thank you Virginia. I agree. Sometimes things that separate me from being closer to her grow to feel unnecessary in my mind, but especially clothes in this case. ;)
21st Jan 2015 2:00am
This is true intimacy. There's a calm to this. Any closer and it becomes sex. Sex becomes fever and ecstasy. A simple embrace contains peace without the urgency. Well done, Sammy.
21st Jan 2015 5:43am
Very true Crowfly. It is a very good feeling. I have been thinking about its significance for a little while now. Thank you for your insightful comment.
22nd Jan 2015 3:55pm
27th Jan 2015 10:19pm
Close Sammy, so very close. Is this courting a current undertaking?
It sounds like there are still some thin barriers in place, in those unnecessary spaces.
It sounds like there are still some thin barriers in place, in those unnecessary spaces.
