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To the Mast
floating around you
fell head first
felt the earth calling
falling
rising
with you
on you
who's arms
hands
heart rejoicing
you got me
safe to the mast
sailing
singing with motions
emotions
flooding my senses
I've gone away
floating around you
Published 19th Jan 2015
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Anonymous
19th Jan 2015 11:05am
this seems...slightly dangerous. dizzy and sea sick. good write!
19th Jan 2015 12:39pm
19th Jan 2015 4:19pm
Very tender, relaxing poem. Incorporating the sea usually brings some serenity to lines, and being "safe to the mast" lends stability. Well done, Rose.
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Jan 2015 1:03am
20th Jan 2015 1:01am
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