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stay?
His touch is so cold
he takes what he wants
when he wants it
she cries when she's alone
only wanting to be desired again
to be touched with passion
to be the center of his attention
he is too busy to notice
her seeking elsewhere
he is too selfish to care
she is torn between what
is right and what is wrong
but how he treats her
is like she is already gone
if he pushes her away
why should she stay
he takes what he wants
when he wants it
she cries when she's alone
only wanting to be desired again
to be touched with passion
to be the center of his attention
he is too busy to notice
her seeking elsewhere
he is too selfish to care
she is torn between what
is right and what is wrong
but how he treats her
is like she is already gone
if he pushes her away
why should she stay
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Re: stay?
17th Jan 2015 6:53pm
Poignant Write here init.
With Sadness and Resentment.
These are the places where
We make tough decisions.
Well-said... Pan
With Sadness and Resentment.
These are the places where
We make tough decisions.
Well-said... Pan
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20th Jan 2015 8:35pm
Re: stay?
17th Jan 2015 11:33pm
don't know what you got till it's gone.
& she's on her way. nicely expressed...
& she's on her way. nicely expressed...
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20th Jan 2015 8:35pm
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20th Jan 2015 8:36pm
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20th Jan 2015 8:38pm
I am sorry you are feeling this way too Poe.
Thanks for reading.
Natalie
Thanks for reading.
Natalie
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Tears always tug at my heart.
Natalie, I regret your having to shed them.
Life is filled with difficulty and opportunity.
We often must face the former before we can
embrace the latter.
Hugs,
Chad
Natalie, I regret your having to shed them.
Life is filled with difficulty and opportunity.
We often must face the former before we can
embrace the latter.
Hugs,
Chad
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re: Re: stay?
20th Jan 2015 8:39pm
Thank you for the kind words Chad. Thanks for the inspiring optimism as always!
Natalie
Natalie
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Anonymous
21st Jan 2015 11:01am
Such sadness, beautiful write
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22nd Jan 2015 1:56am