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Anticipation
she waits for him
she longs for him
she dreams of him
when he will touch her
when he will savor her
when he will adore her
ready for his tongue
ready for his hands
ready for his soldier
to be desired
to be admired
to be acquired
she wants
so she waits
she longs for him
she dreams of him
when he will touch her
when he will savor her
when he will adore her
ready for his tongue
ready for his hands
ready for his soldier
to be desired
to be admired
to be acquired
she wants
so she waits
Published 17th Jan 2015
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17th Jan 2015 5:41pm
Mmmmmm the thoughts are so full of desire
it's hard not to be wanting more! lol
it's hard not to be wanting more! lol
20th Jan 2015 8:29pm
Anonymous
17th Jan 2015 6:36pm
Seductive write.. the ink is steaming.. thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
20th Jan 2015 8:30pm
17th Jan 2015 7:06pm
Ahh, the Anticipation can
be a Biiiaaatttccchhh!
But, when it's finally
taken care of; what a Fucking
release.
And, depending on how long You
had to wait can also be a good
thing cause it could take a
while for You to be Sated: and,
going for a while, is always a
good thing... );-)
Great Write... Pan
be a Biiiaaatttccchhh!
But, when it's finally
taken care of; what a Fucking
release.
And, depending on how long You
had to wait can also be a good
thing cause it could take a
while for You to be Sated: and,
going for a while, is always a
good thing... );-)
Great Write... Pan
20th Jan 2015 8:31pm
Ain't it though??!!!
Thanks for the comments Pan. I always appreciate your feedback.
Natalie
Thanks for the comments Pan. I always appreciate your feedback.
Natalie
18th Jan 2015 9:19am
Emotionally charged words, Natalie. Exceptional write!
Anything worthwhile is worth the wait.
I will wager "he" cherishes your affectionate sentiments.
XO
Chad
Anything worthwhile is worth the wait.
I will wager "he" cherishes your affectionate sentiments.
XO
Chad
20th Jan 2015 8:34pm
Thank you Chad! I am glad you enjoyed it. You are so right, being worth the wait.
Thanks for your lovely comment.
XO :)
Natalie
Thanks for your lovely comment.
XO :)
Natalie
29th Jan 2015 1:19pm
