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Penetration
Perception
penetrate my mind
seduce me with yours
Appreciation
penetrate my defenses
treat me like an angel
Investigation
penetrate my inhibitions
be naughty with me
Consumption
penetrate my mouth
let me taste you
Infiltration
penetrate my body
completely, repeatedly
Infatuation
penetrate my soul
take me to new heights
Penetration...
penetrate my mind
seduce me with yours
Appreciation
penetrate my defenses
treat me like an angel
Investigation
penetrate my inhibitions
be naughty with me
Consumption
penetrate my mouth
let me taste you
Infiltration
penetrate my body
completely, repeatedly
Infatuation
penetrate my soul
take me to new heights
Penetration...
Published 16th Jan 2015
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16th Jan 2015 7:23pm
Damn Deborah, that's
a lot of Penetration.
But, I enjoyed the way
that You crafted this.
It was well thought-out
and very well written.
Pan
a lot of Penetration.
But, I enjoyed the way
that You crafted this.
It was well thought-out
and very well written.
Pan
16th Jan 2015 11:24pm
16th Jan 2015 7:50pm
A constant repeat until one penetration causes all the listed above effects. Real good write.
16th Jan 2015 11:25pm
Anonymous
16th Jan 2015 7:51pm
Deborahlee3313,
Nicely crafted! I like the thrust of this one :-)
tornado
Nicely crafted! I like the thrust of this one :-)
tornado
16th Jan 2015 11:25pm
16th Jan 2015 8:02pm
Rhyming comment:
At many levels and in many senses,
Come, penetrate all my defences.
At many levels and in many senses,
Come, penetrate all my defences.
16th Jan 2015 11:26pm
Thought of rhyming comment after a recent reread: Penetration: A temptation, Invitation.
16th Jan 2015 10:37pm
Penetration, a stimulation
In kind, percolation your verse
boils the mind, penetration
pulsating pound after pound
Penetration inside your essence
mmmmm that has a great sound... Lol
Yea, this was a damn SMOKER my dear :)
In kind, percolation your verse
boils the mind, penetration
pulsating pound after pound
Penetration inside your essence
mmmmm that has a great sound... Lol
Yea, this was a damn SMOKER my dear :)
16th Jan 2015 11:27pm
16th Jan 2015 11:47pm
A very beautiful progression, applicable to a single encounter or a relationship.
Much enjoyed this.
Much enjoyed this.
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