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"Love, Long Gone."
Sure love is a strong magnetic
force that can attract people
together and dissolve and resolve
all dissent between them, making
them once again whole...
And it's stronger than any nuclear
weapon, making men lay down
their arms and embrace one another
as brothers instead of bitter foes...
But can it run its course and become
severed within its cords
So that within hearts hurtful bitterness becomes interwoven so
that from the tongue disparaging words are spoken
Can it grow cold, lackadaisical and no longer yield what it used to grow
All the fruits of love; benevolence, joy, hope, longsuffering that causes us to endure...
But, here I Am; Pan: one of the Earth's Creations
I think that Love has left the World
made by the, "Wounds,"
force that can attract people
together and dissolve and resolve
all dissent between them, making
them once again whole...
And it's stronger than any nuclear
weapon, making men lay down
their arms and embrace one another
as brothers instead of bitter foes...
But can it run its course and become
severed within its cords
So that within hearts hurtful bitterness becomes interwoven so
that from the tongue disparaging words are spoken
Can it grow cold, lackadaisical and no longer yield what it used to grow
All the fruits of love; benevolence, joy, hope, longsuffering that causes us to endure...
But, here I Am; Pan: one of the Earth's Creations
I think that Love has left the World
made by the, "Wounds,"
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Re: "Love, Long Gone."
14th Jan 2015 4:29pm
a profound write Dearest Pan but I think the world a warmer place with you in it.. with love Brenda
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re: Re: "Love, Long Gone."
14th Jan 2015 4:31pm
I Thank You Kindly from
the bottom of my Heart.
Thanks for Your Connection... Pan
the bottom of my Heart.
Thanks for Your Connection... Pan
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14th Jan 2015 5:25pm
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re: Re: "Love, Long Gone."
17th Jan 2015 1:38am
I am glad that I
was able to Offer
You a little bit
of Solace Stuck.
I know Love exists;
it just seems faded
mostly, these days.
Love & Light... Pan
was able to Offer
You a little bit
of Solace Stuck.
I know Love exists;
it just seems faded
mostly, these days.
Love & Light... Pan
Re: "Love, Long Gone."
Anonymous
14th Jan 2015 5:30pm
Dear Pan,
I understand what u are saying and yes it seems we have lost our capacity to love somewhat. On the other hand I think it also looks that way as years ago couples were married and it was against their religion to separate, it wasn't the done thing and women would of been disowned for leaving their husbands. These days (thankfully) that religion has not got the strong hold or respect that it used to and people are free to leave if they fall out of love.
I also think that as a race we have seen so much hate and distraction that we have drifted away from the love and let ourselves be easily manipulated by hate.
Whatever...if you love, you love, but if u don't love, do u walk away or do u pretend?
I understand what u are saying and yes it seems we have lost our capacity to love somewhat. On the other hand I think it also looks that way as years ago couples were married and it was against their religion to separate, it wasn't the done thing and women would of been disowned for leaving their husbands. These days (thankfully) that religion has not got the strong hold or respect that it used to and people are free to leave if they fall out of love.
I also think that as a race we have seen so much hate and distraction that we have drifted away from the love and let ourselves be easily manipulated by hate.
Whatever...if you love, you love, but if u don't love, do u walk away or do u pretend?
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Re: "Love, Long Gone."
14th Jan 2015 8:40pm
re: Re: "Love, Long Gone."
17th Jan 2015 1:39am
Re: "Love, Long Gone."
15th Jan 2015 3:20am
You just haven't found someone who deserves you! Keep searching my friend. Don't give up on love just yet!
Natalie
Natalie
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re: Re: "Love, Long Gone."
17th Jan 2015 1:40am
Re: "Love, Long Gone."
15th Jan 2015 3:16pm
On the real love is out there, but in this day and time some people don't have time for the bullshit to find it or deal with it.
...But still never give up.
...But still never give up.
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re: Re: "Love, Long Gone."
17th Jan 2015 1:41am
Re: "Love, Long Gone."
Anonymous
17th Jan 2015 2:06am
love....it is there. it takes much time and can come painfully slow. it CAN grow old and cold and lackadaisical...BUT it can be reborn. it can flourish. it can solve problems of the heart and mind and body. and it is amazing.
do not lose heart, good sir.
do not lose heart, good sir.
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re: Re: "Love, Long Gone."
17th Jan 2015 3:04am
Thank You for Your Beautiful
and Encouraging words Minerva.
It's good to know that it does
still exist. Although, it's hard to
see sometimes, now a days.
Much Appreciated. .. Pan
and Encouraging words Minerva.
It's good to know that it does
still exist. Although, it's hard to
see sometimes, now a days.
Much Appreciated. .. Pan