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Simply Searching
The very thought of Heaven,
The sweet life in the sky,
Sends my mind a reeling,
With how's but mostly why's.
To be deamed with good or labeled bad,
For the way we live our lives,
Is not a blessing rather than,
A failure in disguise.
I am not mocking God,
Just simply wanting truth,
Think of it not as doubting,
But simply searching proof.
The sweet life in the sky,
Sends my mind a reeling,
With how's but mostly why's.
To be deamed with good or labeled bad,
For the way we live our lives,
Is not a blessing rather than,
A failure in disguise.
I am not mocking God,
Just simply wanting truth,
Think of it not as doubting,
But simply searching proof.
Published 4th May 2011
| Edited 25th May 2011
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17th Jun 2011 00:43am
Your poem gets me thinking about my spiritual beliefs....really great poem...good job. :-)
