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Easy Pickings
By Enigma Rose (crowfly)
Remembering her fragile grace
The way he made her bleed
The frozen wonder on her face
As he left with silent speed
He couldn't stand to hear her nag
All those reminders of his past
So one more for the body bag
And again the dice are cast
He packs more lies up in the car
As his anticipation grows
He finds a fresh one at the local bar
And her name's Enigma Rose
He says "Hey, why don't we take a walk?"
Offering his polished smile
Enigma leads him by the cock
As he says "Hey, I like your style!"
But his confidence begins to fade
As his darkness falls
While Enigma licks her sharpened blade
And aims directly for his balls.
Remembering her fragile grace
The way he made her bleed
The frozen wonder on her face
As he left with silent speed
He couldn't stand to hear her nag
All those reminders of his past
So one more for the body bag
And again the dice are cast
He packs more lies up in the car
As his anticipation grows
He finds a fresh one at the local bar
And her name's Enigma Rose
He says "Hey, why don't we take a walk?"
Offering his polished smile
Enigma leads him by the cock
As he says "Hey, I like your style!"
But his confidence begins to fade
As his darkness falls
While Enigma licks her sharpened blade
And aims directly for his balls.
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Re: Easy Pickings
Anonymous
13th Jan 2015 2:06pm
i do wish i could meet this girl. i think we would get on quite well.
very good write, my dear. very good!
very good write, my dear. very good!
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re: Re: Easy Pickings
13th Jan 2015 2:28pm
I wish I could meet her too, but she's all in the mind, ya know. I'd try to be on my best behavior. Thanks, Minerva.
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re: Re: Easy Pickings
13th Jan 2015 2:30pm
I think she'd leave mine intact. She wouldn't perceive me as much of a threat. Hope not, anyway. Thanks for the support, sweet Schiitaryn.
Re: Easy Pickings
13th Jan 2015 3:50pm
Now that's a feisty one:) careful though...wouldnt want you to sing in high soprano.. love the read, Crowfly.
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re: Re: Easy Pickings
13th Jan 2015 5:23pm
Thanks, Grace. And I wouldn't want to be a castrato. A little too old for that anyway.
Re: Easy Pickings
13th Jan 2015 4:56pm
i had to giggle at Grace's castrati comment ^.^ priceless
this is darkly delicious crowfly, though there may never again be a better moment to go balls to the wall [literally]
this is darkly delicious crowfly, though there may never again be a better moment to go balls to the wall [literally]
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re: Re: Easy Pickings
13th Jan 2015 5:25pm
Re: Easy Pickings
13th Jan 2015 4:57pm
Sir Crow a very dark intriguing write with a twist in the end.. Sounds like Enigma is on top of her game :) excellent inking with love Crim
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re: Re: Easy Pickings
13th Jan 2015 5:27pm
Thanks, Lady Crim. Enigma's a lady after my own heart, as they say. The rest is subject to negotiation.
Re: Easy Pickings
Anonymous
13th Jan 2015 5:18pm
Sir Crow,
You go girl! I love Enigma, she's a girl of pure class!
Lady Muse...giggling
You go girl! I love Enigma, she's a girl of pure class!
Lady Muse...giggling
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re: Re: Easy Pickings
13th Jan 2015 5:28pm
Re: Easy Pickings
13th Jan 2015 6:20pm
re: Re: Easy Pickings
14th Jan 2015 00:51am
It's okay as long as you're on her good side. Just not sure which one that would be. Thanks, Virginia
Re: Easy Pickings
14th Jan 2015 00:42am
OUCH!!...Enigma is quite the femme fatale noir!!
She's rather captivating in that dark, twisted psychotic sort of way....
Truly enjoyed this, mo Chara!
A Stirring Scribe...to be Sure!
She's rather captivating in that dark, twisted psychotic sort of way....
Truly enjoyed this, mo Chara!
A Stirring Scribe...to be Sure!
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Re: Easy Pickings
14th Jan 2015 00:56am
"Captivating" is a good word choice. One could be captured in a benign sense. Thank you, Enchantress
Re: Easy Pickings
14th Jan 2015 6:57am
There is always a bigger fish.
An Urban Legend in the making is Ms Enigma Rose.
An Urban Legend in the making is Ms Enigma Rose.
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Re: Easy Pickings
29th Jan 2015 6:06am
I love vigilante slasher porn. There just isn't enough within such a niche genre.
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