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5:20pm
she's thought of everything
on this rainy Monday
to waste the day away
yoga
lunch with friends
three glasses of wine
the night is closing in
and she is more restless
than ever
on this rainy Monday
to waste the day away
yoga
lunch with friends
three glasses of wine
the night is closing in
and she is more restless
than ever
Published 12th Jan 2015
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12th Jan 2015 10:32pm
Really nice flow/diction...
Another dark night awaits, huh? hate those...
Enjoyed...
Another dark night awaits, huh? hate those...
Enjoyed...
14th Jan 2015 00:04am
Thank You Fenom for the thoughtful comments...yes day turns into night...seems to be a recurring theme...pressed upon us for no reason...😊
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14th Jan 2015 00:05am
13th Jan 2015 2:53am
a bubble bath. a good book or a great movie. or just hangin out in the underground...
14th Jan 2015 00:06am
13th Jan 2015 10:03am
the fourth glass of wine usually sorts it out :)
this resonates deeply with me, JeJe. another lovely write, cher xo
this resonates deeply with me, JeJe. another lovely write, cher xo
14th Jan 2015 00:08am
Thank You Katja...yes maybe that is exactly what i needed...😊
Your comments are much appreciated!!xx
Your comments are much appreciated!!xx
28th Jan 2015 12:33pm
can feel the loneliness in this write....excellent poem but i seem to say that every time i review you. cause it is true! :)
29th Jan 2015 00:53am
