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Birthday Meal (small piece of an older poem)
The table set for one.
Please.. be seated
A birthday dinner
not one to forget.
He sat down
intrigued
watching my every move.
Enjoy your meal
As I let the dressing gown fall to
reveal lacy underwear.
Now smiling
you not eating? he said
oh I plan too
don't you worry about that
With a final kiss
I crawled under the table.
Hearing the knife on the plate
as he did as instructed
and started to eat...
Please.. be seated
A birthday dinner
not one to forget.
He sat down
intrigued
watching my every move.
Enjoy your meal
As I let the dressing gown fall to
reveal lacy underwear.
Now smiling
you not eating? he said
oh I plan too
don't you worry about that
With a final kiss
I crawled under the table.
Hearing the knife on the plate
as he did as instructed
and started to eat...
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Re: Birthday Meal (small piece of an older poem)
Anonymous
12th Jan 2015 11:08am
OH!was not expecting that little delightful twist at the end. good job!
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re: Re: Birthday Meal (small piece of an older poem)
12th Jan 2015 11:11am
Thankyou Minerva
it's part of an old poem of mine in here
lol thankfully the less erotic part
it's part of an old poem of mine in here
lol thankfully the less erotic part
Re: Birthday Meal (small piece of an older poem)
12th Jan 2015 1:34pm
re: Re: Birthday Meal (small piece of an older poem)
12th Jan 2015 1:36pm
It seems even awhile back as this piece is taken from, it seems my mind was rather naughty then too
go me! xD
go me! xD
Re: Birthday Meal (small piece of an older poem)
12th Jan 2015 2:13pm
The least he could do is forget his etiquette. You might consider posting the rest of this as a series. I'm hooked.
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re: Re: Birthday Meal (small piece of an older poem)
Anonymous
12th Jan 2015 2:18pm
he is following directions! he can't forget his etiquette!
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re: Re: Birthday Meal (small piece of an older poem)
12th Jan 2015 2:38pm
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12th Jan 2015 2:39pm
Yes Minerva
it might be his birthday
but he'll do as he's told all the same
it might be his birthday
but he'll do as he's told all the same
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12th Jan 2015 2:45pm
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Anonymous
12th Jan 2015 2:45pm
exactly.
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12th Jan 2015 3:01pm
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Anonymous
12th Jan 2015 3:35pm
much better.
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