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Lovely One
Tender Goddess
let us run away
to the cosmos
where no mortal pain
can touch us
as I bedeck your hair in starlight
seeing supernovas in your eyes
all thought of Earth burns away
in your sweet embrace I seek solace
loneliness no longer can harm us
we've transcended
one of spirit and mind
shaking off our fleshly bodies
we entwine in love and lust
lady of my dreams
let us covert amongst the planets
calling space our home
no black hole can claim us here
we are at peace in the outer realms
no need for the sun
you illuminate my life and give it meaning
please see me now my Goddess
clothed in stardust
an immortal lover
let us run to the cosmos
transcend time and the hurt
that comes with it
"written for the loveliest of ladies
while listening to this"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IIiBLM46ls8
let us run away
to the cosmos
where no mortal pain
can touch us
as I bedeck your hair in starlight
seeing supernovas in your eyes
all thought of Earth burns away
in your sweet embrace I seek solace
loneliness no longer can harm us
we've transcended
one of spirit and mind
shaking off our fleshly bodies
we entwine in love and lust
lady of my dreams
let us covert amongst the planets
calling space our home
no black hole can claim us here
we are at peace in the outer realms
no need for the sun
you illuminate my life and give it meaning
please see me now my Goddess
clothed in stardust
an immortal lover
let us run to the cosmos
transcend time and the hurt
that comes with it
"written for the loveliest of ladies
while listening to this"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IIiBLM46ls8
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Re: Lovely One
Anonymous
11th Jan 2015 6:00pm
Oh baby this is so beautiful..you melt my heart, I will run away in my mind with u over and over. Eternally yours my beautiful lady. Thank u so much for this :') ❤️
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11th Jan 2015 6:56pm
you inspire love in me lovely one.. so tender yet fierce of spirit you are.. thank you for loving me back :) with love Brenda
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2015 6:08pm
Well done, this is very very beautiful like the picture and the song amazing.
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11th Jan 2015 6:09pm
I tend to believe that the shedding of our bodies, the prisons of the flesh, will finally be welcome. Ecstasy can probably be shared in a purer form that is probably beyond comprehension. We'll just have to wait and see. It sounds like you have a Goddess in mind for the final trip. You're both lovely, Lady Crim.
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11th Jan 2015 8:10pm
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11th Jan 2015 8:19pm
excellent write :-)
A place where there is no pain, a place where we can shake off these mortal bodies -
I want a ticket to go :-)
A place where there is no pain, a place where we can shake off these mortal bodies -
I want a ticket to go :-)
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12th Jan 2015 2:26am
Wow, this is inspirational. Your craft has no boundries as you have proven with this area of you I have never witnessed. Beautiful Crim
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12th Jan 2015 8:50pm
thank you Soul I'm trying to be more brave and reveal the softness of my heart :) with love Crim
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Your ethereal magic brings warmth even to the those cold atrial planes that drive and entwine our spirits. I must go listen to the sound that you shared. Lovely* ❤ - blue angel
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Anonymous
17th Jan 2015 2:19am
Sexy Crim......wonderful tribute write......you're a beautiful soul that luvs so much......pic is stunning......enjoyed.....xo :)
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8th May 2016 6:50pm
yes it's a great thing though this was written for a beautiful woman who is dear to my heart..
love Crim
love Crim