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Garden Of Lust
Lusting, loving
a God and Goddess
mortal me
roaming naked
in the their gardens
playfully they adorn me
in what nature has made
Mother Earth with her giving hands
daisy chains entwined in my hair
sunflowers covering my bare breasts
nothing to hide my womanly place
this is their place to feast from
impaled by His hardness
tenderly licked by Her sweet tongue
as he rides me roughly
gentle Goddess
Dominating God
feeds the lusts of this mortal
in awe of their beauty
and knowledge of all things
below and above
hungrily I drink His seed
creamy, salty in verse
coming down my throat
I drink him in hoping
to gain wisdom
so thirsty for this man
my Goddess spreads open for me
allowing me to feast from her sweetness
I taste her fierce yet tender soul
as I lap at her swollen bud
she bestows the greatest gift to me
coming on my waiting lips
like honey she drips on my tongue
so empowering and life giving
she removes the adornments from my breasts
suckles one nipple then the next
she instructs me how to please
Her my Goddess and Him my God
as I lay naked and sated
in their private sanctuary
in the beautiful gardens of their creation
a God and Goddess
mortal me
roaming naked
in the their gardens
playfully they adorn me
in what nature has made
Mother Earth with her giving hands
daisy chains entwined in my hair
sunflowers covering my bare breasts
nothing to hide my womanly place
this is their place to feast from
impaled by His hardness
tenderly licked by Her sweet tongue
as he rides me roughly
gentle Goddess
Dominating God
feeds the lusts of this mortal
in awe of their beauty
and knowledge of all things
below and above
hungrily I drink His seed
creamy, salty in verse
coming down my throat
I drink him in hoping
to gain wisdom
so thirsty for this man
my Goddess spreads open for me
allowing me to feast from her sweetness
I taste her fierce yet tender soul
as I lap at her swollen bud
she bestows the greatest gift to me
coming on my waiting lips
like honey she drips on my tongue
so empowering and life giving
she removes the adornments from my breasts
suckles one nipple then the next
she instructs me how to please
Her my Goddess and Him my God
as I lay naked and sated
in their private sanctuary
in the beautiful gardens of their creation
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 6th Jan 2015
| Edited 7th Jan 2015
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Re: Garden Of Lust
6th Jan 2015 7:55pm
This is amazing, Lady Crim. One erotic detail after another, so many aligned with my own fantasies. The garden setting gives this additional grace and beauty. Thanks for the cultivation!
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Re: Garden Of Lust
6th Jan 2015 8:06pm
thank you Sir Crow for roving through the gardens of my fantasy ;) with love Crim
Re: Garden Of Lust
6th Jan 2015 8:10pm
Omg fucking blazing hott stuff Crim!! Wow u just bout incinerated my ass lol
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re: Re: Garden Of Lust
6th Jan 2015 8:21pm
re: Re: Garden Of Lust
6th Jan 2015 8:21pm
Re: Garden Of Lust
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Jan 2015 8:34pm
6th Jan 2015 8:11pm
Crim,
I will never look at your sunflowers the same way again! :-) your garden is awesome!
tornado
I will never look at your sunflowers the same way again! :-) your garden is awesome!
tornado

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re: Re: Garden Of Lust
6th Jan 2015 8:22pm
Re: Garden Of Lust
6th Jan 2015 8:28pm
re: Re: Garden Of Lust
6th Jan 2015 9:32pm
Re: Garden Of Lust
Anonymous
6th Jan 2015 8:34pm
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re: Re: Garden Of Lust
6th Jan 2015 9:33pm
Re: Garden Of Lust
Anonymous
6th Jan 2015 8:54pm
Beautiful write.. You've just got your own style of erotica.. and you're damn good at it.. Thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave

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re: Re: Garden Of Lust
6th Jan 2015 10:28pm
Re: Garden Of Lust
6th Jan 2015 9:09pm
Brenda, You have Painted
a Masterpiece that is both
Erotic and will probably
incite dreams in all the
readers minds tonight.
You are more than, "Mortal:"
You are a Goddess; Diva, with
Your own personal Gifts that
You offer.
"My Love Compelled Me; Come
into My Garden, My Sensual
Desire; and, I was Intoxicated
by Her Whim, and, Complied...
She Beckoned Me and, I Came,"
Unapologetically Masterful... Pan
a Masterpiece that is both
Erotic and will probably
incite dreams in all the
readers minds tonight.
You are more than, "Mortal:"
You are a Goddess; Diva, with
Your own personal Gifts that
You offer.
"My Love Compelled Me; Come
into My Garden, My Sensual
Desire; and, I was Intoxicated
by Her Whim, and, Complied...
She Beckoned Me and, I Came,"
Unapologetically Masterful... Pan
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re: Re: Garden Of Lust
6th Jan 2015 9:15pm
what a beautiful comment, gift you've bestowed upon me Pan.. thank you most graciously with love Brenda
Re: Garden Of Lust
Anonymous
7th Jan 2015 10:03am
As Pan said you are so far from Mortal, you are an absolute Goddess of extreme beauty and power, you are one of 3 great lady, all as important as the other. This poem blew me away, it is so delightful I wish to ravish you right now...and also the other ;)
Never put yourself down again, you are an equal and a sister and a lover..the power of three, couldn't be, with out thee
❤️ )O(
Never put yourself down again, you are an equal and a sister and a lover..the power of three, couldn't be, with out thee
❤️ )O(

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re: Re: Garden Of Lust
7th Jan 2015 5:02pm
thank you for the love you've shown me beautiful Goddess and this ink.. thinking on that ravishment ;) with delight and a big smile on my face with love Brenda
Re: Garden Of Lust
7th Jan 2015 8:22pm
Such a sexy portrait you have painted here. I feel as though I have just feasted upon the fruit produced by immortal seed. Frolic in pleasure, Crim. Respectfully - blue angel
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re: Re: Garden Of Lust
7th Jan 2015 10:46pm
Re: Garden Of Lust
7th Jan 2015 11:19pm
excellent write :-)
beautiful description of the action and landscapes a truly erotic poem
:-)
beautiful description of the action and landscapes a truly erotic poem
:-)
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re: Re: Garden Of Lust
8th Jan 2015 7:28am
Re: Garden Of Lust
9th Jan 2015 3:10pm
Love love this... you wrapped me up in her world... I lived in her head for but a moment while reading...
to be the object of such worship and devotion is beautiful as well...
thanks xx
to be the object of such worship and devotion is beautiful as well...
thanks xx
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re: Re: Garden Of Lust
9th Jan 2015 5:07pm