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Deep
Paint me in deep blue,
rippling around my heart,
you the slick devil, sly stranger,
instigator without agitator,
be only you,
navigator of my dreams,
navigate my forsaken sea
take me again so the voyage be entrusted
till I'm beyond the deep blue.
rippling around my heart,
you the slick devil, sly stranger,
instigator without agitator,
be only you,
navigator of my dreams,
navigate my forsaken sea
take me again so the voyage be entrusted
till I'm beyond the deep blue.
Published 5th Jan 2015
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2015 11:11am
this yearning to have someone in the deep places of your heart is beautiful. lovely write. very lovely.
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6th Jan 2015 00:43am
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2015 4:17pm
Really loved the wordplay, and the imagery.. nicely done..
Dave
Dave
6th Jan 2015 4:52pm
