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Dantalion
Dantalion he introduces himself
he claims to have much power and wealth
into my soul His legions raped
taking control of my being
my will they did take
entering me with their darkness and sex
once so resistant now a willing participant
Lily is who they call me
licking my bud spreading my petals at will
to resist them impossible I love the way they make me feel
from the light to the darkness I did fall
into the abyss in hell my soul now dwells
to be ravaged and eaten
so tasty the darkness
Dantalion my lover says no one can resist him
"it's time to feed me dear Lily
spread your petals for me
I'm licking and tasting your bud is in now dewy"
he claims to have much power and wealth
into my soul His legions raped
taking control of my being
my will they did take
entering me with their darkness and sex
once so resistant now a willing participant
Lily is who they call me
licking my bud spreading my petals at will
to resist them impossible I love the way they make me feel
from the light to the darkness I did fall
into the abyss in hell my soul now dwells
to be ravaged and eaten
so tasty the darkness
Dantalion my lover says no one can resist him
"it's time to feed me dear Lily
spread your petals for me
I'm licking and tasting your bud is in now dewy"
Published 4th Jan 2015
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4th Jan 2015 11:12pm
Leaves me breathless, Lady Crim. Is Dantalion an alias for "the man of wealth and taste" in the Rolling Stones' "Sympathy for the Devil"?
5th Jan 2015 6:26pm
Close Sir Crow He is a Grand Duke in Hell.. thank you for leaving your thoughts and reminding me of a song I love.. with love Crim
4th Jan 2015 11:20pm
I like this Dantalion Brenda.
It is said that He is a Great
Daemon Whom Commands 36,000
other daemons and can cause
love and become the appearance
of anyone at the Power of His
own Will.
And, can also change the will
of anyone to Comply with His
Will at anytime.
He is a great Governor in the
Echelons.
You have Crafted a Profound and
meaningful piece of work here.
Very Compelling script... Pan
It is said that He is a Great
Daemon Whom Commands 36,000
other daemons and can cause
love and become the appearance
of anyone at the Power of His
own Will.
And, can also change the will
of anyone to Comply with His
Will at anytime.
He is a great Governor in the
Echelons.
You have Crafted a Profound and
meaningful piece of work here.
Very Compelling script... Pan
5th Jan 2015 6:29pm
thank you Pan yes Dantalion revealed Himself to me.. I knew you would have knowledge of who He is.. I'm happy and stoked by your response to this write.. with love Brenda
4th Jan 2015 11:20pm
Holy fucking WOW!!!!
Lily is who they call me
licking my bud spreading my petals at will
to resist them impossible I love the way they make me feel
U little Vixen you!!
Wow Crim i adore you!!!
Luv
Jackie xoxox
Lily is who they call me
licking my bud spreading my petals at will
to resist them impossible I love the way they make me feel
U little Vixen you!!
Wow Crim i adore you!!!
Luv
Jackie xoxox
5th Jan 2015 6:30pm
thank you beautiful Zazzles I'm so pleased you liked this ink.. I adore you as well lovely lady with love Crim :)
4th Jan 2015 11:28pm
A lovely write, Brenda.
S6, L3, are you missing the word 'one' after no? Figured I'd ask...
S6, L3, are you missing the word 'one' after no? Figured I'd ask...
5th Jan 2015 6:31pm
thank you Fenom for the lovely comment and heads up on my error with love Brenda
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5th Jan 2015 6:32pm
5th Jan 2015 2:38am
there is so much passion in this dark place you speak of, there must also be love. stunning...
5th Jan 2015 6:33pm
5th Jan 2015 5:14am
Hell-of-a-good write, Brenda.
Dwelling on the dark side.
Lusting in the shadows.
xo
Chad
Dwelling on the dark side.
Lusting in the shadows.
xo
Chad
5th Jan 2015 6:33pm
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5th Jan 2015 9:58am
This shows knowledge and a sweetly corrupt mind, yummy words from a delicious poet! X
5th Jan 2015 6:34pm
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5th Jan 2015 1:48pm
"once so resistant now a willing participant"
this line bothers me - not totally sure why
anyway as always it's an excellent write of fire and passion and lovely sexual descriptions
:-)
5th Jan 2015 6:36pm
thank you David I understand why that part bothers you but I fought so hard then came to understand things on another level.. if that makes any sense.. with love Crim
