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Piercing
His words considered viciously
Allowing them to land on this page
Lacking style or much sense
But engineered to be wounding in content
Then entered in the "dark" or "erotic" categories
She finds them, and they pierce
Cursing his user name
She leaves a comment, simply "Why?"
Which he ignores
Then retreats smug and satisfied
Contemplating the finer points of further damage
Then moving on to his next victims
His own sanity slipping a little further with every stop.
Allowing them to land on this page
Lacking style or much sense
But engineered to be wounding in content
Then entered in the "dark" or "erotic" categories
She finds them, and they pierce
Cursing his user name
She leaves a comment, simply "Why?"
Which he ignores
Then retreats smug and satisfied
Contemplating the finer points of further damage
Then moving on to his next victims
His own sanity slipping a little further with every stop.
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Re: Piercing
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2015 4:11pm
The worst type of person.
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3rd Jan 2015 4:18pm
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2015 4:18pm
Sir Crow,
I really feel this dark energy, but I'm confused as to why...may I ask what your inspiration on this was?
Lady Muse
I really feel this dark energy, but I'm confused as to why...may I ask what your inspiration on this was?
Lady Muse
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Lady Muse, I have a couple of friends who have been subjected to the perversity of sadists who cruise websites. They tried to trust and take risks in decent faith, but came out hurt and struggling to regain some level of confidence. The stronger ones manage to do so. "Piercing" is not only about internet websites. I've seen this here and there through most of my life. It's just that the potential for anonymity is greater on the internet and can be particularly dangerous. Predators or just thoughtless people can inflict damage (through negligence or intent), betray confidences, then hide, changing their user names or simply dropping off the grid and possibly staying off it until the heat dies down and then they return. I hope this makes sense. Sir Crow
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2015 7:52pm
Sir Crow,
Yes it does completely...I know exactly how it feels to be feel vulnerable and threatened this.
Your words are a great comfort my dear friend.
Lady Muse
Yes it does completely...I know exactly how it feels to be feel vulnerable and threatened this.
Your words are a great comfort my dear friend.
Lady Muse
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Re: Piercing
3rd Jan 2015 5:07pm
i have seen women do this too or encourage the public displays of drama by not blocking/reporting & then playing the victim to garner sympathy...
... either way, cyber stalking, bullying etc is a new form of low too many fall victim to.
an illuminating write, crowfly
... either way, cyber stalking, bullying etc is a new form of low too many fall victim to.
an illuminating write, crowfly
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3rd Jan 2015 5:30pm
Thanks, shadoe. It's obviously a disturbing topic and a complex one, and I'm not sure I've considered this with a clear head. I can only really speak for myself and a few friends, if that. I think it was worth a try.
Re: Piercing
3rd Jan 2015 5:39pm
my heart has been pierced online.. this is a deep ink Sir Crow.. thank you for covering this disturbing topic with love and respect Crim
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3rd Jan 2015 7:16pm
My heart has been pierced as well, Lady Crim. I'm just not sure to what extent yet. I need more information before I draw further conclusions. I'll just have to see. Thank you.
Re: Piercing
3rd Jan 2015 6:50pm
S H I V E R S.....( a portion of what composes certain nightmares!!)
Soo drawn in by the intensity of your ink, mo Chara!
A very creepy, but compellingly accurate piece depicting the behavior of the psychosexual on-line predator.
Soo drawn in by the intensity of your ink, mo Chara!
A very creepy, but compellingly accurate piece depicting the behavior of the psychosexual on-line predator.
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3rd Jan 2015 7:18pm
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4th Jan 2015 00:18am
A close look, closer still... Online where minds touch though physically miles apart.
Vulnerability in a new form and most ill-equipped for it. Your poem addresses these issues, in an effective form.
Vulnerability in a new form and most ill-equipped for it. Your poem addresses these issues, in an effective form.
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4th Jan 2015 00:24am
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Re: Piercing
29th Jan 2015 2:55am
Fucking passive aggressive cowards love stirring shit and running. Equal effort put towards garnering an uplifting reaction would cure the emotional blockage that oft drives trolls to flex their heckler muscles. Fuck em. Callouts are stronger than fallout and everyone has target points.
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22nd Apr 2015 6:27am