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Daily Sacrifice
Infuriating this charged state
Pent-up corralled red taped
To a bed post
Feathered and tarred
Sticky evidence
Of my crimes against conception
Labile in my clambering
Of this insatiable caldera
To throw myself off its edge
In daily sacrifice
Oh hourglass form
Porcelain golden syrup stained ebon
I glory in all of your incarnations
Prostrate in abject exudate
My offerings chalky legacy
Writ in creamy nimbus
Surplus in my penance
When my prayers are answered
Sheathed in your warm forgiveness
I proffer my tithe freely
And cry your name in exultance
Pent-up corralled red taped
To a bed post
Feathered and tarred
Sticky evidence
Of my crimes against conception
Labile in my clambering
Of this insatiable caldera
To throw myself off its edge
In daily sacrifice
Oh hourglass form
Porcelain golden syrup stained ebon
I glory in all of your incarnations
Prostrate in abject exudate
My offerings chalky legacy
Writ in creamy nimbus
Surplus in my penance
When my prayers are answered
Sheathed in your warm forgiveness
I proffer my tithe freely
And cry your name in exultance
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Re: Daily Sacrifice
29th Dec 2014 12:50pm
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30th Dec 2014 6:57am
Re: Daily Sacrifice
Anonymous
29th Dec 2014 1:36pm
who is this goddess?
to receive such high esteem
you must be devout
accepting your praise,
your patron deity stands
forgiving comes soft
to receive such high esteem
you must be devout
accepting your praise,
your patron deity stands
forgiving comes soft

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30th Dec 2014 7:12am
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Anonymous
30th Dec 2014 12:12pm
mister 76, you are slipping! your last line has 6 syllables. good thing i am forgiving.

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30th Dec 2014 1:10pm
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Anonymous
30th Dec 2014 8:52pm
women are bad for that. you should watch out.

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Re: Daily Sacrifice
29th Dec 2014 4:15pm
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30th Dec 2014 7:15am
Re: Daily Sacrifice
29th Dec 2014 4:25pm
I love the ambiguity of that last stanza. It does seem to be a goddess rather than a higher power. I would guess that power is right there on your bed, at least for the time being. Maybe later... Great job, Frank, and God bless.
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30th Dec 2014 7:18am
Sniper accurate as always Crowfly, I am beginning to believe you are telepathic or empathic or both!
This Goddess can take on many forms, we find idols of her in many guises, and for each they are unique in how they stir ones need to bring forth their offerings!
This Goddess can take on many forms, we find idols of her in many guises, and for each they are unique in how they stir ones need to bring forth their offerings!
Re: Daily Sacrifice
29th Dec 2014 7:21pm
a seductive offering to your sexual deity.. great, sensual inking with love Crim
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30th Dec 2014 7:19am