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so alone yet so crowded

So alone yet so crowded


Sweet smell of perfume
Cotton candy?
Peppermint?
Musk?
Who knows
She walks in
Remembers to smile
Struggling to smile
Accomplishes it
Lame jokes come her way
She chuckles
Smiles again
Looks around trying to find someone
Crowd full of people
Yet the girl still feels so alone
Written by lolnotfunny
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