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freedom is more than 'nothing left to loose' (Friday, 21 November 2014 11:26pm)
Freedom is being
able to find your own way
to god as you see
Him her it them universe
Without priests interference
Freedom is being
able to love whom you will
Allowing for age
And consanguinity
honor them with legal bonds
Freedom is knowing
That the quality of school
Does not depend on
local government fools
And liars every one
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entered into a competition
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/7410/
able to find your own way
to god as you see
Him her it them universe
Without priests interference
Freedom is being
able to love whom you will
Allowing for age
And consanguinity
honor them with legal bonds
Freedom is knowing
That the quality of school
Does not depend on
local government fools
And liars every one
=====================
entered into a competition
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/7410/
Published 23rd Dec 2014
| Edited 27th Dec 2014
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23rd Dec 2014 5:14am
glad you liked it, :)
Sylable Count Poems Haiku/Senryu (5-7-5) Tanka (5-7-5-7-7) tend to cut through the chaff, leaving you little space for flowery speach...
unfortunately, when you try branch out try to write prose, it leaves you a bit ... unarmed
Sylable Count Poems Haiku/Senryu (5-7-5) Tanka (5-7-5-7-7) tend to cut through the chaff, leaving you little space for flowery speach...
unfortunately, when you try branch out try to write prose, it leaves you a bit ... unarmed
