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him and I ~

letting go of what I knew
allowing him to ravage my mind
our words were like a tidal wave
rushing through our veins
the warmth of his breath
passing over my tender neck
and finally into my ears
he is my treasure and I his
our love is like an intense journey
moving slowly
flowing in the current forever
Written by tommielynn (Tommie Lynn)
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