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where there is no time
downward his hands burn
sinking into soft bliss
and the embers smoulder
softly she sweeps across
his need with scarlet lips
and melts into mist
the still of the night grows
he consumes her with desire
and pleasure withers into passion
sinking into soft bliss
and the embers smoulder
softly she sweeps across
his need with scarlet lips
and melts into mist
the still of the night grows
he consumes her with desire
and pleasure withers into passion
Published 23rd Dec 2014
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23rd Dec 2014 1:42am
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Anonymous
23rd Dec 2014 1:57am
Tommie Lynn,
Love how you softly fanned the embers until the flame caught :-) Enjoyed!!
tornado
Love how you softly fanned the embers until the flame caught :-) Enjoyed!!
tornado
23rd Dec 2014 1:59am
I like it hot and slow, until I say otherwise. Glad you enjoyed tornado, thank you :)
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23rd Dec 2014 2:51am
Every one of your
sexy writes Tommie
have a way of making
a mans chest begin
to heave from desire.
Enticing Poem... Pan
sexy writes Tommie
have a way of making
a mans chest begin
to heave from desire.
Enticing Poem... Pan
23rd Dec 2014 9:01pm
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23rd Dec 2014 9:03pm
Means a lot coming from such a talented and sexy
lady like yourself Crim, thank you so much ;)
lady like yourself Crim, thank you so much ;)
Anonymous
23rd Dec 2014 4:05am
this is the way i like it. never saying exactly what you mean and leaving room for the reader's imagination. great!
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23rd Dec 2014 6:42am
Beautiful Tommie! "...sinking into soft bliss" is a wonderful line. The "...sweep across his need" makes me tingle.
23rd Dec 2014 9:07pm
23rd Dec 2014 7:24am
Shudder inducing - excuse me whilst I go and take a cold shower.
Sizzling and beautiful
Sizzling and beautiful
23rd Dec 2014 9:08pm
