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Honey
The food of love, I shall lay out
my sugar daddy of sweet desires
kneels before gazing
gazing into my shop of wonders
I am his captive, slave
his queen bee
spread out before him
my honey to attract
opening for the first time
revealing moist warm Turkish delights
to savoir on his pallet
A feast to begin
taste sensations
waiting on my cherry bomb explosions
Published 16th Dec 2014
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16th Dec 2014 8:17pm
16th Dec 2014 9:53pm
16th Dec 2014 9:52pm
Thankyou Mr K
yes the blurred picture was a creative choice
giving a hint of what was taking place without the full on tainted colour we often see these days
yes the blurred picture was a creative choice
giving a hint of what was taking place without the full on tainted colour we often see these days
17th Dec 2014 00:19am
You add freshness to the candy and sweetness metaphor for eroticism. The honey is seductive, but then watch out for those cherry bomb explosions! Fine job, Rose.
Thankyou Crow xD
eroticism on this one for sure
though i tried to steer a steady sensual ship
through chopping waters
i believe the picture didn't overly cook the life out of the scribe
where maybe a clear colourful outlook would have
imho
eroticism on this one for sure
though i tried to steer a steady sensual ship
through chopping waters
i believe the picture didn't overly cook the life out of the scribe
where maybe a clear colourful outlook would have
imho
17th Dec 2014 5:17am
17th Dec 2014 5:37am
17th Dec 2014 11:48am
Omg... I can't believe dude lost his watch!!
Huh?? Oh... Ok my bad he didn't!? oops! Carry on then
as you were! lol... Seriously though...VERY
HOT imagery n words my dear! :)
Huh?? Oh... Ok my bad he didn't!? oops! Carry on then
as you were! lol... Seriously though...VERY
HOT imagery n words my dear! :)
17th Dec 2014 1:12pm
