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Strong
And there we would pretend, on that warm engaging
afternoon, stepping out into the small courtyard, the
wooden table with it's annoying squeak if its pushed
to far; And there he is, strikingly handsome, but I care
not for it, because he's mine and he loves me beyond
anything else, as I do him, this to me means more, this
is why we pretend like this, him all in his finery, me
all in white as if I were about to say I do I do I do! to a
watching crowd, and I would, he knows; But the watching
crowd will have to watch another day.
Today's about pretending,
pretending what happens after the vows, after everyone's
gone home, just us two left, left alone to explore our love
on a deeper, more desirable level, feeling like I'm sacrificial
fodder, but it's how I feel, I expect and want to be taken by
him because my love is as his.
Strong.
afternoon, stepping out into the small courtyard, the
wooden table with it's annoying squeak if its pushed
to far; And there he is, strikingly handsome, but I care
not for it, because he's mine and he loves me beyond
anything else, as I do him, this to me means more, this
is why we pretend like this, him all in his finery, me
all in white as if I were about to say I do I do I do! to a
watching crowd, and I would, he knows; But the watching
crowd will have to watch another day.
Today's about pretending,
pretending what happens after the vows, after everyone's
gone home, just us two left, left alone to explore our love
on a deeper, more desirable level, feeling like I'm sacrificial
fodder, but it's how I feel, I expect and want to be taken by
him because my love is as his.
Strong.
Published 14th Dec 2014
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14th Dec 2014 7:30am
Makes me feel peaceful in a horny kind of way?... Love reading your poems Rose 😁 thanks for share
14th Dec 2014 7:34am
No worries EM
it's all about the higher love that two share
when it's their time
it's all about the higher love that two share
when it's their time
14th Dec 2014 7:49am
It's the most awkward love there is lol. Maybe thats just how it was when I got married :-/ although we waited for each other so yeah. Living in the past now :-p
14th Dec 2014 8:40am
I don't personally agree that it's awkward
finding that one person male/female that takes you're yearning desire for real love to the brink of aching pain within
well.. once found than it's never awkward, infact it should be perfect
but yeah not everyone finds that one person who makes them feel that way inside
some never get to feel that higher love emotion
finding that one person male/female that takes you're yearning desire for real love to the brink of aching pain within
well.. once found than it's never awkward, infact it should be perfect
but yeah not everyone finds that one person who makes them feel that way inside
some never get to feel that higher love emotion
14th Dec 2014 7:52am
Can't say I've ever waited that long, personally. But, whatever works for ya.lol
Seriously, though, great ink, well written and it borders right on the brink of love/erotica, something
I haven't seen too much of.
Seriously, though, great ink, well written and it borders right on the brink of love/erotica, something
I haven't seen too much of.
14th Dec 2014 8:32am
thankyou Colten
I didn't want it to shine overly as erotica
getting the readers an option of filling in the erotic gaps xD
I didn't want it to shine overly as erotica
getting the readers an option of filling in the erotic gaps xD
14th Dec 2014 11:11am
Lovely Rose as you say you ask the reader to join in the delight sensual erotic an innocense about the writing; such needs no detailed descrption.
14th Dec 2014 1:55pm
14th Dec 2014 1:39pm
That pic. is steamy as hell, yet your words
paint your heart in ink...beautiful! :)
paint your heart in ink...beautiful! :)
14th Dec 2014 1:57pm
aww thank you Poetik
I did think the picture was too graphic for this scribe but now I see it fits perfectly
steamy..good word choice xD
I did think the picture was too graphic for this scribe but now I see it fits perfectly
steamy..good word choice xD
14th Dec 2014 8:33pm
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