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"Throb: The second cumming...
The veined muscle stiffens like granite
How the hell can it not when it's awakened
Rousing the senses to the apex of want
Only desire is to feed on her wantonly
Better stop threatening the pussymeat slob...
Because, it's just not right when it's hunger
makes it THROB...
How the hell can it not when it's awakened
Rousing the senses to the apex of want
Only desire is to feed on her wantonly
Better stop threatening the pussymeat slob...
Because, it's just not right when it's hunger
makes it THROB...
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Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
Anonymous
14th Dec 2014 3:46am
Wow Poet.....won't even attempt words this one aroused.....thought provoking.....xo :)
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14th Dec 2014 3:29pm
Lol u won't? never knew to be so shy before lady lol
still, I thank u n appreciate you support always :)
still, I thank u n appreciate you support always :)
Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
14th Dec 2014 4:42am
Stay hungry for whomever makes you throb and you both shall release...
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14th Dec 2014 5:38am
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Oh trust me I will! lol thank you my friend, appreciate
your support so much :)
P.S. This comment is meant for init4the cookie
But for some crazy reason, it won't stay in the reply space it should be...
your support so much :)
P.S. This comment is meant for init4the cookie
But for some crazy reason, it won't stay in the reply space it should be...
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Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
14th Dec 2014 5:44am
i feel it.
when the veined muscles stiffens, all it wants is to be eaten, swallowed, held tightly til the second cumming.
when the veined muscles stiffens, all it wants is to be eaten, swallowed, held tightly til the second cumming.
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Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
14th Dec 2014 5:44am
Excellent show of bravado my dear!!
loved this Po!!
((((((((((((Po)))))))))))
Zazzles xoxox
loved this Po!!
((((((((((((Po)))))))))))
Zazzles xoxox
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re: Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
Aaaawwww thank u my sweetness! I'm do super happy you do!
lol appreciate your support always :)
lol appreciate your support always :)
Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
14th Dec 2014 7:29am
Some titles just draw me in,
actually I wasn't dragged..
I came of my own free will
to witness the throb
and that glorious second cumming..
I'm all for that Mr Poe Hehe
xD
actually I wasn't dragged..
I came of my own free will
to witness the throb
and that glorious second cumming..
I'm all for that Mr Poe Hehe
xD
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re: Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
14th Dec 2014 3:54pm
Oh sweet Rose drawing you in is so flattering to me...
I'm happy I did that n grateful for your support :)
I'm happy I did that n grateful for your support :)
Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
14th Dec 2014 2:55pm
Short and so...
Well, an example of powerful poetry you always write, Poetik :)
Well, an example of powerful poetry you always write, Poetik :)
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re: Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
14th Dec 2014 3:57pm
Don't be bashful, say it my sweetheart lol
Thanks a ton I'm grateful for your continued support :)
Thanks a ton I'm grateful for your continued support :)
Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
14th Dec 2014 3:09pm
Apparently, the second helping is always more delicious after the first.
So much imagery without convoluting the air with too many words.
Awesome !
So much imagery without convoluting the air with too many words.
Awesome !
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14th Dec 2014 3:58pm
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14th Dec 2014 3:40pm
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14th Dec 2014 4:00pm
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14th Dec 2014 5:49pm
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14th Dec 2014 5:52pm
Hhhhmmmm that's a great question! lol thanks
bro. Truly appreciate ur support :)
bro. Truly appreciate ur support :)
Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
14th Dec 2014 5:50pm
This erotic made me smile Poe :) nothing better than a hard throb when there's a hot pussy waiting to take it ;) with love Crim
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re: Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
14th Dec 2014 7:37pm
Mmmmm ur soooooo right Crim! lol
Thank you much, I truly appreciate the support :)
Thank you much, I truly appreciate the support :)
Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
14th Dec 2014 7:38pm
ur throb
makes me 4 ever throb
no one can my throb
rob
not even you
throb throb
now it drops drop
to rethrob
makes me 4 ever throb
no one can my throb
rob
not even you
throb throb
now it drops drop
to rethrob
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re: Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
14th Dec 2014 8:16pm
Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
14th Dec 2014 8:29pm
Whew "rousing the senses to the apex of want" now that line just lingers bouncing around in my head after reading this...Pulsating Poetry Poetik...enjoyed!!!
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re: Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
17th Dec 2014 3:00am
Aaaawwww you sweet desirous woman you! :)
Thank u my dear, appreciate u always :)
Thank u my dear, appreciate u always :)
Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
15th Dec 2014 00:05am
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15th Dec 2014 3:41pm
My my PM her candy must quite tempting n addictive to bring forth such sizzling ink sir.
All can say is Mmmmmm
Time to walk outside into the cold blowing wind
This lil grl has gotta cool off now
All can say is Mmmmmm
Time to walk outside into the cold blowing wind
This lil grl has gotta cool off now
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re: Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
17th Dec 2014 3:02am
Well I have to agree with you there lsb
It indeed is! lol thanks a bunch for ur thoughts n support sweetie :)
It indeed is! lol thanks a bunch for ur thoughts n support sweetie :)
Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
15th Dec 2014 4:14pm
What more can I say PM that hasn't already been said.... ;)
Hmmmm...so so descriptive....
Hmmmm...so so descriptive....
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re: Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
17th Dec 2014 3:03am
You can go on n on if you want, I won't stop ya! lol
Thank you sweet K, u rock! :)
Thank you sweet K, u rock! :)
Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
15th Dec 2014 11:19pm
Awesome write brother, something to be said about hunger, it tells your secrets of your strong passion.
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17th Dec 2014 3:04am
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16th Dec 2014 2:35am
Whoa, my my my. Clutch the pearls...it definitely got my mind wondering. Nice
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re: Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
17th Dec 2014 3:05am
Well I'm pleased it did n I hope to always move you
to voice your thoughts on my ink, it's helpful n truly appreciated :)
to voice your thoughts on my ink, it's helpful n truly appreciated :)
Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
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26th Feb 2015 10:45am
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re: Re: "Throb: The second cumming...
26th Feb 2015 5:04pm
Aaaawwww well I intended it to be short, but
I hoped it would be hot n u just confirmed so thank u! Truly n always grateful :)
I hoped it would be hot n u just confirmed so thank u! Truly n always grateful :)