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Magic
I long to feel your magic
Touching my every inch
Leaking from your fingertips
Stripping me of all inhabitions
I try to keep it together
It's useless though
As thoughts of you form
I'm ravaged by a storm of emotions
My most intimate of thoughts
As of late include you Sir
But that's no secret
I always give that away in your presence
This is by no means an illusion
My desire to be yours is very true
Lost deep in your passionate grip
Would be the greatest gift of all
Waking to your sated smile
To only satisfy you once again
Perfection between my sheets together
A man and a woman who have found eachother
Touching my every inch
Leaking from your fingertips
Stripping me of all inhabitions
I try to keep it together
It's useless though
As thoughts of you form
I'm ravaged by a storm of emotions
My most intimate of thoughts
As of late include you Sir
But that's no secret
I always give that away in your presence
This is by no means an illusion
My desire to be yours is very true
Lost deep in your passionate grip
Would be the greatest gift of all
Waking to your sated smile
To only satisfy you once again
Perfection between my sheets together
A man and a woman who have found eachother
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Re: Magic
10th Dec 2014 7:39pm
This really is sorcery, Belle. "Perfection between my sheets together." Who could ask for anything more?
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re: Re: Magic
11th Dec 2014 4:16pm
Oh dear Crow u humble me hun
Oh I'm sure there r plenty
Who would want more than me
Glad u enjoyed it hun
Oh I'm sure there r plenty
Who would want more than me
Glad u enjoyed it hun
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10th Dec 2014 8:37pm
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11th Dec 2014 4:17pm
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Re: Magic
10th Dec 2014 10:07pm
Well, well, this is a spicy, revealing bit of work.
Your, "Sir" is most fortunate, Ms Belle.
Excellent write!
Your, "Sir" is most fortunate, Ms Belle.
Excellent write!
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re: Re: Magic
11th Dec 2014 4:21pm
I'm a spicy n passionate lil thing Mr Vegas
Nice to know the woman I am shines thru
And enjoyment is found n the way that I share it
Thanx so much
Nice to know the woman I am shines thru
And enjoyment is found n the way that I share it
Thanx so much
Re: Magic
10th Dec 2014 10:46pm
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11th Dec 2014 4:28pm
I'm laying here keeping a spot good warm for him
Glad u enjoyed it Glen
Glad u enjoyed it Glen
Re: Magic
11th Dec 2014 00:25am
Tingles linger
From the stems of dreams
That cup to hold
The treasure
Of my screams
Lovely write
From the stems of dreams
That cup to hold
The treasure
Of my screams
Lovely write
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re: Re: Magic
11th Dec 2014 4:30pm
My dreams n screams
Go hand n hand
Cuz this sorcerer
Has total control of them
Glad u liked it AS. Thanx so much hun
Go hand n hand
Cuz this sorcerer
Has total control of them
Glad u liked it AS. Thanx so much hun
Re: Magic
11th Dec 2014 8:30am
Like most of the men above I imagine, I am a tad 'green' with said envy of 'Sir'.
Great poem lilsouthernbelle, I can feel your charged mind state in the words you have written.
Great poem lilsouthernbelle, I can feel your charged mind state in the words you have written.
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re: Re: Magic
11th Dec 2014 4:34pm
Franko thanx so much gun
I'm a very highly charged woman
Who doesn't hold anything back
In life or n my ink
I'm a very highly charged woman
Who doesn't hold anything back
In life or n my ink
Re: Magic
11th Dec 2014 9:26am
This is very sweet and honest. I was quickly pulled into thoughts and emotion relative to your expression
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That is the ultimate compliment hun
If I have stirred emotions if any kind
I feel so honored
Thank you for that
If I have stirred emotions if any kind
I feel so honored
Thank you for that
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12th Dec 2014 1:38am
Re: Magic
12th Dec 2014 5:57am
lovers savoring all that passion under the sheets. sure, Belle, it's the perfect gift...
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Re: Magic
12th Dec 2014 5:37pm
Belle, your use of language is fantastic in this piece...true magic. From the double entendre of "Stripping me of all inhibitions" to "Waking to your sated smile." Beautiful!
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Re: Magic
16th Dec 2014 4:32am
Magic that remakes the world into a heavenly place. It is strong and breaks all bounds.
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