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My Borders
Welcome to the world of Belle
Once you cross my borders darlin'
Say goodbye to despair and sorrow
Only pleasure awaits you here
Leave all maps behind
I'm confident you can find your way
Take time to explore
No need to be in a hurry at all
Travel over every peak
Dive into every hidden lil cave
Enjoy all of soft valleys too
They are all yours
Take time to enjoy the sites
Drink the view in waiting ith your eyes
I want every inch of me etched in your memory
So that I'm with you all the time
The smooth landscape needs your touch
Your strong manly hands taking control
Leading me into brand new territories
Experiencing my world in new unexpected ways
Once you cross my borders darlin'
Say goodbye to despair and sorrow
Only pleasure awaits you here
Leave all maps behind
I'm confident you can find your way
Take time to explore
No need to be in a hurry at all
Travel over every peak
Dive into every hidden lil cave
Enjoy all of soft valleys too
They are all yours
Take time to enjoy the sites
Drink the view in waiting ith your eyes
I want every inch of me etched in your memory
So that I'm with you all the time
The smooth landscape needs your touch
Your strong manly hands taking control
Leading me into brand new territories
Experiencing my world in new unexpected ways
Published 9th Dec 2014
| Edited 11th Dec 2014
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9th Dec 2014 9:30pm
"Every hidden lil cave" and "soft valleys too." They're all there for your lucky man. Your borders are beautiful, Belle, and, once crossed, there's probably no going back. That "smooth landscape" sounds like Paradise.
11th Dec 2014 5:54pm
It's a very inviting world Crow
I will admit that
Once welcomed n he will want for nothing
Glad u liked my ill tour guide hun
I will admit that
Once welcomed n he will want for nothing
Glad u liked my ill tour guide hun
9th Dec 2014 10:38pm
Love the metaphor of the woman's body as a landscape (I have used that in one of my own poems).
11th Dec 2014 5:56pm
Thanx so much SS
I thought it fit very well
And worked perfectly with what I was feeling
I thought it fit very well
And worked perfectly with what I was feeling
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9th Dec 2014 11:00pm
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11th Dec 2014 5:59pm
It's well worth the trek hun
Or so I've been told hahaha
Thanx so much for giving it a read
Or so I've been told hahaha
Thanx so much for giving it a read
10th Dec 2014 1:50am
I shall pack my camping gear. Sounds like I'll be gone for a couple of days. Enjoyed.
11th Dec 2014 6:03pm
Oh really X?
All can say is....
Once I get n my world
He'll never want to leave
Thanx for the read hun
All can say is....
Once I get n my world
He'll never want to leave
Thanx for the read hun
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