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She didn't know she was...
Hey there
pretty lil
brown eyes
won't you look
into the night sky
n' don't you dare
tell him no lie
you say you ain't
beautiful, but
why...?
Here...
toss these
tainted tattered pictures
as so many
visions pass his eye...
back in a special time,
when love
dropped by...
She cried
she had so
many reasons
she didn't think
she didn't think,
she was beautiful...
but she was
beautiful...
to her guy...
pretty lil
brown eyes
won't you look
into the night sky
n' don't you dare
tell him no lie
you say you ain't
beautiful, but
why...?
Here...
toss these
tainted tattered pictures
as so many
visions pass his eye...
back in a special time,
when love
dropped by...
She cried
she had so
many reasons
she didn't think
she didn't think,
she was beautiful...
but she was
beautiful...
to her guy...
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8th Dec 2014 7:20pm
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8th Dec 2014 8:44pm
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9th Dec 2014 1:12am
Re: She didn't know she was...
8th Dec 2014 8:49pm
So true, and so well written...
I really like the structure, sounds beautiful...
I really like the structure, sounds beautiful...
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re: Re: She didn't know she was...
9th Dec 2014 1:13am
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9th Dec 2014 3:57am
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9th Dec 2014 12:38pm
Thank u my dear Desire! Ur always wonderful
n I truly appreciate your continued support of my ink :)
n I truly appreciate your continued support of my ink :)
Re: She didn't know she was...
9th Dec 2014 4:29am
Every woman has her fears but every woman wants to hear that she's beautiful to her guy...lovely reminder :)
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re: Re: She didn't know she was...
9th Dec 2014 4:50am
Thank u my sweetheart, yea I agree that do
n I think every guy should tell them that always :)
Appreciate you :)
n I think every guy should tell them that always :)
Appreciate you :)
Re: She didn't know she was...
9th Dec 2014 1:55pm
I think or rather wish every woman would see what those who loves her see!
I wish we believe in ours as much as we worry of what others think of us!Especially our men!
I wish every woman would understand and more so,remember,that our beauty and value is infinite!Too large a number to calibrate!
But again,we were made emotional beings,and self-esteem(unfortunately)isn't always our stronghold!
Great Ink dearest!Perfect timing;FindS me in a time when i am doing some critical analysis of myself and the women' in general!
Kisses dear!lOVE IT!
I wish we believe in ours as much as we worry of what others think of us!Especially our men!
I wish every woman would understand and more so,remember,that our beauty and value is infinite!Too large a number to calibrate!
But again,we were made emotional beings,and self-esteem(unfortunately)isn't always our stronghold!
Great Ink dearest!Perfect timing;FindS me in a time when i am doing some critical analysis of myself and the women' in general!
Kisses dear!lOVE IT!
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re: Re: She didn't know she was...
9th Dec 2014 5:36pm
Aaaawwww thank u Lady P! I'm super happy you loved it
n deeply grateful too :)
n deeply grateful too :)
Re: She didn't know she was...
9th Dec 2014 4:59pm
This is so beautiful PM...
we need always to remember that we are beautiful to the one who loves us... :)
we need always to remember that we are beautiful to the one who loves us... :)
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re: Re: She didn't know she was...
10th Dec 2014 4:46am
Thank you my sweet K, I agree n I'm happy you liked this
as always your support is greatly appreciated :)
as always your support is greatly appreciated :)
Re: She didn't know she was...
10th Dec 2014 6:58am
this made me go "aaww" out loud lol such is your ink that i talk to my screen.
living with bdd, i understand your protagonist's pov. a great write Poe
living with bdd, i understand your protagonist's pov. a great write Poe
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10th Dec 2014 7:46am
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11th Dec 2014 4:11pm
re: Re: She didn't know she was...
11th Dec 2014 7:14pm
Thank you! N I'm so sorry about the messy (scribble) mess
of it lol... jk appreciate your thoughts n time :)
of it lol... jk appreciate your thoughts n time :)
Re: She didn't know she was...
12th Dec 2014 6:02am
You write in such a delicate way sometimes that is so very beautiful. (I wish I could do that better!)
Very nice
Very nice
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re: Re: She didn't know she was...
12th Dec 2014 3:52pm
Aaaawwww ur comment was delicate n beautiful to me! :)
Thank u my sweet friend :)
Thank u my sweet friend :)
Re: She didn't know she was...
Anonymous
14th Dec 2014 3:50am
Sweet Poet......this is emotionally touching.....showing that luv always sees beauty in the soul.....gorgeous write.....enjoyed...xo :)
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re: Re: She didn't know she was...
6th Jan 2015 1:28pm
Thank u flower, knowing how you express your
heart so well it's truly a compliment :)
heart so well it's truly a compliment :)
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22nd Dec 2014 5:32am
re: Re: She didn't know she was...
6th Jan 2015 2:02pm
Re: She didn't know she was...
6th Jan 2015 7:43am
That is a really sweet poem its sad though that some wwomen dont recognize their own beauty.
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re: Re: She didn't know she was...
6th Jan 2015 2:08pm
U are absolutely right my dear, many don't
have enough self love to recognize their worth
nor beauty...thank you for your thoughts n support :)
have enough self love to recognize their worth
nor beauty...thank you for your thoughts n support :)