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Daylight's Darkness
We share the same shadows
Though we never have met
Watching love pass our windows
But that's not what we get
Someone almost looked in
So I pulled down the shades
I wonder what might have been
But the thought quickly fades
There was a look in your eyes
Erased by a whisper of fear
We'll never know if it lies
Pretending we cannot hear
Living parallel lives
Close in so many ways
Because we want without drive
We are so far away
Right under our noses
On the very same street
Right under our noses
Is a nice place to meet
Though we never have met
Watching love pass our windows
But that's not what we get
Someone almost looked in
So I pulled down the shades
I wonder what might have been
But the thought quickly fades
There was a look in your eyes
Erased by a whisper of fear
We'll never know if it lies
Pretending we cannot hear
Living parallel lives
Close in so many ways
Because we want without drive
We are so far away
Right under our noses
On the very same street
Right under our noses
Is a nice place to meet
Published 8th Dec 2014
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8th Dec 2014 12:49pm
8th Dec 2014 12:56pm
Anonymous
8th Dec 2014 3:04pm
I love the way this flowed..a beautiful poem sweetly expressed.
8th Dec 2014 4:24pm
8th Dec 2014 3:46pm
Living parallel lives
Close in so many ways
Because we want without drive
We are so far away
A stanza that's relatable. Poetryman:) I always enjoy your writes no matter how dark they seem sometimes.
Close in so many ways
Because we want without drive
We are so far away
A stanza that's relatable. Poetryman:) I always enjoy your writes no matter how dark they seem sometimes.
8th Dec 2014 4:26pm
9th Dec 2014 12:49pm
sometimes the creative flow just clicks.
it definately clicked here excellent write
:-)
it definately clicked here excellent write
:-)
10th Dec 2014 4:59am
27th Nov 2024 2:31am
I really enjoyed this poem. It was very well articulated, and I liked how it flowed.
I particularly liked this stanza:
"Someone almost looked in
So I pulled down the shades
I wonder what might have been
But the thought quickly fades"
I relate to the concept of "pulling the shades" on someone when they get too close, in fear of what they may find. However, I still wonder what could have been if I just let the interaction happen.
Very well written, thank you for sharing!
I particularly liked this stanza:
"Someone almost looked in
So I pulled down the shades
I wonder what might have been
But the thought quickly fades"
I relate to the concept of "pulling the shades" on someone when they get too close, in fear of what they may find. However, I still wonder what could have been if I just let the interaction happen.
Very well written, thank you for sharing!
27th Nov 2024 9:21pm
