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'Dark Christmas...'
*inspired by first, watching A Christmas Carol
n dreaming of that infectious Song, Jingle Bells!
Lol...yea, so what I'm twisted!!? lol*
It was the year 2053
the future's Christmas Eve...
"Sing ole hell"
"Sing ole hell"
Santa's gone astray... "
For what one can tell
to give love don't gell
and kindness smells
as angst, and fear reigns...
surely, death... is on the way!
Oppressed, and devoid
of any dough...
their broken spirit's light
Some decide to sell all out
as a few attempt to fight...
So... "Sing ole hell, sing ole hell
No this madness' just not right..."
Let us all hope, and pray...
THAT 'future' will
never see light of day..."
Yea, "Sing old hell
Sing old hell..."
n dreaming of that infectious Song, Jingle Bells!
Lol...yea, so what I'm twisted!!? lol*
It was the year 2053
the future's Christmas Eve...
"Sing ole hell"
"Sing ole hell"
Santa's gone astray... "
For what one can tell
to give love don't gell
and kindness smells
as angst, and fear reigns...
surely, death... is on the way!
Oppressed, and devoid
of any dough...
their broken spirit's light
Some decide to sell all out
as a few attempt to fight...
So... "Sing ole hell, sing ole hell
No this madness' just not right..."
Let us all hope, and pray...
THAT 'future' will
never see light of day..."
Yea, "Sing old hell
Sing old hell..."
Published 7th Dec 2014
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7th Dec 2014 3:53pm
Ohh that would be a bleak future!One without magic and christmas cheer and oh dear santa to bring presents to our (then)grandchildren!
Oh am singing out loud and praying such a dark christmas never see the light!
Great and different approach from all other Xmas inks av read!
Love it!!!
Oh am singing out loud and praying such a dark christmas never see the light!
Great and different approach from all other Xmas inks av read!
Love it!!!
7th Dec 2014 5:49pm
Bleak is right my dear, however sometimes
we need to see the possibility of bleak to wake
up so it won't become a reality... Thank u my sweetheart
I appreciate u much! :)
we need to see the possibility of bleak to wake
up so it won't become a reality... Thank u my sweetheart
I appreciate u much! :)
7th Dec 2014 7:49pm
Poetik...that's amazingly clever but rather naughty:) don't you think. Interesting read though.
7th Dec 2014 8:25pm
Lol me so sorry bout the naughty my sweet Grace
but sometimes the dark? it's just gotta come out! lol
Thank you soooooo much sweetie... :)
but sometimes the dark? it's just gotta come out! lol
Thank you soooooo much sweetie... :)
7th Dec 2014 7:57pm
no laughs, no love, no tidings and good cheer
no santa, no elves, and certainly no reindeer...
Dark Christmas indeed...this read like a christmas carol the grinch and scrooge would sing together lol dark but definately an interesting an awesome read...loved your twisted mind..enjoyed!
no santa, no elves, and certainly no reindeer...
Dark Christmas indeed...this read like a christmas carol the grinch and scrooge would sing together lol dark but definately an interesting an awesome read...loved your twisted mind..enjoyed!
8th Dec 2014 00:31am
I love that you love my twisted mind! Ur the best my sweet lady, n truly I'm grateful for all your support always! :)
7th Dec 2014 11:16pm
I hope to never see the day that Satan Claus reigns and hell is all we get for Christmas great ink Poe with love Crim
8th Dec 2014 2:28am
I hear ya Crim, me too! Thankfully all I did was dream this
n though life isn't what we hope, it's not THAT far gone yet! Thank u, truly appreciate u :)
n though life isn't what we hope, it's not THAT far gone yet! Thank u, truly appreciate u :)
7th Dec 2014 11:19pm
8th Dec 2014 4:15am
8th Dec 2014 2:07am
To appreciate one must be without. I am not much of a Christmas dude but I certainly felt the pain of it missing. Out standing write.
8th Dec 2014 4:18am
Yea, I hear you bro. N no doubt if I lived through this reality
I'd surely miss it... Thanks a ton, appreciate your support greatly . :)
I'd surely miss it... Thanks a ton, appreciate your support greatly . :)
8th Dec 2014 4:19am
Yea, I hear you bro. N no doubt if I lived through this reality
I'd surely miss it... Thanks a ton, appreciate your support greatly . :)
I'd surely miss it... Thanks a ton, appreciate your support greatly . :)
8th Dec 2014 5:43am
i will not be told that Santa isn't real lol or will come over to the dark side for cookies.
this is great stuff Poe, really brought a smile to my face this morning.
this is great stuff Poe, really brought a smile to my face this morning.
8th Dec 2014 1:03pm
Oh I promise if you hear isn't real, it won't be from me ok? Lmao... Thanks my sweet mami, uhm can you save
some of those cookies for me!? lol
some of those cookies for me!? lol
8th Dec 2014 3:41pm
Oh, so from now I will always hear 'Jingle bells' like this?.. :)
Really good write.
Really good write.
8th Dec 2014 4:35pm
Yay so now hear in ur head huh!? lol thank you my dear, I'm happy u enjoyed n I'm sorry to put that in ur head lol...
