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wi and hanwi
wi lighting up the sky
making our day
hanwi making our night
true loves
never to be together
all because of iktomni
the trickster
and a beautiful girl
a seating arrangement
broken
a slip of the lips
was all it took
the reason hanwi
covers her face as
she nears wi
ashamed she is
they used to travel
they skies together
never more
making our day
hanwi making our night
true loves
never to be together
all because of iktomni
the trickster
and a beautiful girl
a seating arrangement
broken
a slip of the lips
was all it took
the reason hanwi
covers her face as
she nears wi
ashamed she is
they used to travel
they skies together
never more
Published 4th Dec 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 4th Dec 2014 9:51pm
4th Dec 2014 9:50pm
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9th Jan 2015 8:04pm
Gabriel
yes it is about the sun and the moon. and thank you for your comment
emo1
yes it is about the sun and the moon. and thank you for your comment
emo1
5th Dec 2014 1:52am
9th Jan 2015 8:07pm
JohnFeddeler
thank you for your comment. and yes the sioux how did you know?
emo1
thank you for your comment. and yes the sioux how did you know?
emo1
9th Jan 2015 10:56pm
your title intrigued me so I googled it. I love it when a poem leads me to fascinating research...
21st Jan 2015 00:22am
21st Jan 2015 10:30pm
well crafted poetry fascinates me, & so too does your curiousity. you're a very good writer & you know things that I don't.
I read your work & many others her to learn...
I read your work & many others her to learn...
5th Dec 2014 8:37pm
9th Jan 2015 8:07pm
