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Just Babbling
If I set it all up
it wouldn't work
just let it be...
don't try to arrange
no stacking,no straightening
step over here,step over there
where one leads...just go.
No time to ponder
the river flows and the water falls
winding,churning,babbling and bubbling
over and under rocks and dirt
ending up where it belongs
pure and simple.
it wouldn't work
just let it be...
don't try to arrange
no stacking,no straightening
step over here,step over there
where one leads...just go.
No time to ponder
the river flows and the water falls
winding,churning,babbling and bubbling
over and under rocks and dirt
ending up where it belongs
pure and simple.
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Re: Just Babbling
1st Dec 2014 11:57pm
Indeed...let everything go as it should. Go with the flow you were meant to do that.
"It is hard for thee to kick against the pricks" :) good read Hashman.
"It is hard for thee to kick against the pricks" :) good read Hashman.
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2nd Dec 2014 6:05am
I wish i had such serenity!Am such a control freak...
Well,this month il try your way see how it goes!
Good morning!
Well,this month il try your way see how it goes!
Good morning!
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3rd Dec 2014 1:14am
Go with the flow, I can relate, especially since
everything I try n plan never works out! lol
Great advice bro.
everything I try n plan never works out! lol
Great advice bro.
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