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Queen Mistress
Playing out a fragile hand
Cards dropped for a final stand
Notices the heartbreak stain
Then spots her through the window pane
Finding he can't help but stare
Combing sparks out of her hair
Someone murmurs "She's the one.
Queen mistress when your day is done."
Cards dropped for a final stand
Notices the heartbreak stain
Then spots her through the window pane
Finding he can't help but stare
Combing sparks out of her hair
Someone murmurs "She's the one.
Queen mistress when your day is done."
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Re: Queen Mistress
30th Nov 2014 5:36pm
a very cryptic write Crowfly it has me perplexed.. though enjoyed none the less.. with respect Crim
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re: Re: Queen Mistress
30th Nov 2014 6:05pm
I not too good at making sense much of the time. Glad you enjoyed anyway, Crim.
Re: Queen Mistress
30th Nov 2014 6:16pm
Once again, I enjoy the images my mind draws while reading... impressive.
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30th Nov 2014 6:45pm
Re: Queen Mistress
30th Nov 2014 11:43pm
Imagery evoked is intriguing. Is she the one...destined for the crown in a home or mere kept woman although much beloved.:) food for thoughts Crowfly. Good read.
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re: Re: Queen Mistress
1st Dec 2014 3:41am
Good question, Grace. She's a lot more than a kept woman. I picture a queen with some of the qualities of a mistress. I'm probably thinking in stereotypes, and pretty wishful thinking at that. But if there's a crown involved she'd have it. Within reason.
Re: Queen Mistress
1st Dec 2014 00:39am
it's a seductive woman who takes a man's mind off the hand. not good for the gambler...
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1st Dec 2014 3:27am
But this time I'm willing to throw it all in. I may never learn. But thanks for the advice, John. I can always use it.
Re: Queen Mistress
1st Dec 2014 2:59pm
at first i thought it was death... but i figure death's more a milf really.
this leaves me curious and oh it's a wonderful state of mind to be. much enjoyed this thought provoking write, crowfly
this leaves me curious and oh it's a wonderful state of mind to be. much enjoyed this thought provoking write, crowfly
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re: Re: Queen Mistress
1st Dec 2014 5:43pm
Thank you, shadoe. This is based on a dream I had a couple of weeks ago. This dream featured a beautiful friend, and I happened to spot her washing her hair using a bucket as I gazed out my window into an outside parking lot. She looked up at me, her hair still wet, and gave me a beckoning wave. I started to head for my door then, unfortunately, woke up.
"Queen Mistress" is an extrapolation on this. The poem is just a fantasy. The woman who inspired this is real and quite a wonder on her own terms.
Anyway, I hope that satisfies your curiosity shadoe. Thanks for your interest.
"Queen Mistress" is an extrapolation on this. The poem is just a fantasy. The woman who inspired this is real and quite a wonder on her own terms.
Anyway, I hope that satisfies your curiosity shadoe. Thanks for your interest.
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