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Simplicity
I need you
I want you
It's pure
It's simple
No complications
Just us
Me and you
Sharing together
Our fantasies
Deepest dreams
Hidden thoughts
Secrets trysts
I want you
It's pure
It's simple
No complications
Just us
Me and you
Sharing together
Our fantasies
Deepest dreams
Hidden thoughts
Secrets trysts
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Re: Simplicity
30th Nov 2014 3:48am
There's purity to "Simplicity". No coy posturing, no games. Brave and beautiful, Belle.
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Re: Simplicity
30th Nov 2014 3:57am
As we say in problem solving, "Always practice
the KISS method. Keep it simple, stupid. Do not
overlook the obvious."
Nothing overlooked here, Ms Belle. :)
Simple, concise, effective.
Like it a lot!
the KISS method. Keep it simple, stupid. Do not
overlook the obvious."
Nothing overlooked here, Ms Belle. :)
Simple, concise, effective.
Like it a lot!
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Re: Simplicity
30th Nov 2014 4:19am
sweet & easy. lovemaking uninterrupted by the outside world. feeling the heat, Belle...
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Re: Simplicity
30th Nov 2014 4:45am
Re: Simplicity
Simplicity on three counts - in the write, in the desire, and the naked but tasteful picture. Leads me to rhymingly comment:
Stripped to its simplicity
Is how lovemaking should be;
No need for pretensive dress,
Just the truth of nakedness.
Stripped to its simplicity
Is how lovemaking should be;
No need for pretensive dress,
Just the truth of nakedness.
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Re: Simplicity
30th Nov 2014 4:30pm
It's simple n yet very deeply complex too
How? well just think bout that 'road'
towards this simple union...yea I feel ya
my sweet one! :)
How? well just think bout that 'road'
towards this simple union...yea I feel ya
my sweet one! :)
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Re: Simplicity
Anonymous
30th Nov 2014 4:32pm
yes u heard it right .. it's simple ... :) let's make it ha ha!
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Re: Simplicity
Love is both the simplest thing that one can feel, and the most complex thing in the entire universe at the same time! For me, it is part and parcel of my very being... without love I would not be me, since love and passion are both part of what defines me as a person. But of course, the degree of simplicity and complexity varies from person to person also, and thus love and passion can mean something different to each individual. Yet at the same time, they are things we can all relate to and understand. In short... powerful stuff! :)
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Re: Simplicity
Anonymous
1st Dec 2014 4:19am
Belle,
I love wants and needs that pure and simple :-) Ghanks for sharing :-)
tornado
I love wants and needs that pure and simple :-) Ghanks for sharing :-)
tornado
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Re: Simplicity
1st Dec 2014 3:18pm
Passion and desire distilled to the beautiful truth. I really enjoy this piece, LSB. This stanza is so comfortable and desired:
"Sharing together
Our fantasies
Deepest dreams
Hidden thoughts
Secrets trysts"
"Sharing together
Our fantasies
Deepest dreams
Hidden thoughts
Secrets trysts"
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Re: Simplicity
1st Dec 2014 11:31pm
Re: Simplicity
3rd Dec 2014 4:57pm