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Strictly Speaking
She clocks in strictly speaking
And looks like stormy weather
The new clients are freaking
Looks like she's naked under leather
But serpentine her ways
Requires sacrifice
Her storm arrives and stays
And lightning will strike twice.
And looks like stormy weather
The new clients are freaking
Looks like she's naked under leather
But serpentine her ways
Requires sacrifice
Her storm arrives and stays
And lightning will strike twice.
Published 28th Nov 2014
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28th Nov 2014 9:05pm
She could be just a femme fatale... In two stanzas you put so much, crowfly.
28th Nov 2014 9:15pm
28th Nov 2014 10:22pm
boot blackers line up to the left :)
this is so... dita von whiplash.
much enjoyed crowfly
this is so... dita von whiplash.
much enjoyed crowfly
29th Nov 2014 1:14am
29th Nov 2014 1:19am
Sounds like someone to contend with. Imagery evoked is quite interesting. Good read Crowfly.
29th Nov 2014 1:28am
29th Nov 2014 4:00pm
sounds like one bad ass, sexy woman with a man that can handle her twice no less enjoyed with respect Crim
29th Nov 2014 5:24pm
29th Nov 2014 6:20pm
So thunder down under...
She's an on the spot AND later spank bank fantasy? Damn.
Thanks for writing this crowfly.
She's an on the spot AND later spank bank fantasy? Damn.
Thanks for writing this crowfly.
29th Nov 2014 7:52pm
30th Nov 2014 1:45am
Hmmmmm...sounds like a woman who will keep u n line
U better b a good boy darlin
U better b a good boy darlin
30th Nov 2014 2:07am
30th Nov 2014 4:56am
Crow......what an excellent write.....she's sounds like a real Lady.....xo :)
4th Dec 2014 6:46pm
